| Reviews for love hurts |
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Grimm2 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011 Dear deprived (Blink), WOO! I've jus' finished readin' all your invader fanfics! You rock! Like, seriously, all of them are awesome! I loveded them! I will loveded them foreveer~! Sincerely, Grimm2 |
ZimzOwn chapter 1 . 7/20/2002 Err..That story was great i loved it with all my heart...I must have punch now! |
Invader Mel chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 Ooooohhhhhh... Cheese... !Okay,,, I thnvk rthos is wi8eread. Ca;sen YOuoou reaesad itkit? it6jit sayofas: I think this is weird (reffering to the typing) Can you read it? ! |
ILY and Co chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 *Vell walks by Red's room and hears murmuring form behind it. She puts the side of her head up against it so she could hear what he was saying. ILYAMA was there to.* ILYAMA: Oow! Quit it, will ya! Red: Fine, fine. Just don't go off and kill someone when you get mad again, okay? ILYAMA: I'll do what I want to do when I'm mad. Red: Okay, but please? ILYAMA: Oh fine. *More murmering is heard. Vell leans on the door only to find it open, letting he fall inside of the room. A nude Red and ILYAMA stop kissing on the bed and turn to face Vell.* ILYAMA: Oh, it's only you Vell. I thought it was one of the sentry people. But will you leave? Vell: Uhh, SURE! *Runs as fast as she can out the door. It closes behind her.* ILYAMA: I thought you LOCKED that door! *Slaps him.* Red: *falls backwards of the bed.* Oow! Love hurts... ILYAMA: What did you say? Red: *Nervously* Nothing! Nothing at all! |
GirChic chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 I LOVE THIS STORY! I love it goooooooooood :) |
Amethyst Soul chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 Lmao! Good job, that was both kawaii and hilarious. |
Ztarlight chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 WOOOO! That was wild. funny, too. :) |
Kwee chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 *LOL* THAT WAS GREAT! But, what does the smell of cheese have to do with falling in love? I like cheese a lot, but we're just good friends. _ |
The Slayer chapter 1 . 11/9/2001 FUNNY! I like very MUCH! - |