Well I guess the jokes on me, thought was complete as it stated but it was a lie.

Poor Tonya, that was awful.

Bella has never dressed up or wore makeup but Alice didn't even comment on it. I hope Edward at least notices how hot she looks.

I hope mike gets pummeled...

Omg... why would this story be labeled complete when it's not? That is just wrong, really wrong. I would definitely not read a story that was written in 2008 that was not showing complete for obvious reasons. For the same obvious reasons you shouldn't show a story complete when it's not. This was the best chapter so far and I can't believe I don't get to find out what happens.

I'm really hoping Rose isn't going to be sexually assaulted in this story.

I'm glad mike got the beat down he deserved, I hope Edward doesn't get in any trouble.

I'm glad Edward punched mike and we also learned a little more about what happened between mike and Bella, asshole. I do think Bella is being too hard on Jessica unless there's more to the story. You can only try to lead a friend in the right direction, you can't make their decisions for them. Mike was not Bella's boyfriend and she could care less about him so Jessica did not really do anything to Bella. I'm not saying that Bella should stay a close friend to Jessica, she is going down a dark road and Bella should definitely distance herself if she doesn't want to be involved in her life choices. You had mentioned that Bella thought of Jessica like family so that made the way she treated Jessica for her desicions that hurt nobody but herself seem worse. I could tell a sibling to stay away from an abusive guy but I wouldn't abandon her if she didn't listen, you don't give up on family. Just my opinion but it seemed harsh when she didn't personally hurt Bella in any way.

There getting along and at least Edward isn't running.

I'm going to assume Edward was hurt and Tanya died during a car accident and Edward had been drinking. Tanya seemed to have romantic feelings for Edward but it was never clear how Edward actually felt in return. It obvious Tanya's poss death destroyed him but he might have just loved her as a friend. He did say he never felt for a girl what he was feeling for Bella.

There are certain things you can't come back from and a guy telling me to fuck off would be on that list. No matter his excuse to me it would show a lack of character, there are many rude comments that could have been used instead.

Rose and Bella crying because their parents were arguing seemed a bit over the top since there wasn't any details to why it was so traumatic. If there was talk of divorce or this was an unusual occurrence then it might make more sense. Was there a reason everyone was home when they usually weren't? It never said.

It was pretty clear that mike was horrible to Bella but I really hope she never slept with him.

Why is this marked complete, when it is not anywhere near complete? That’s really mean of you to do. Seriously.

is it wrong that I'm glad TONya is dead? I fucking hate that bitch