The mild Haruka bashing is getting a bit annoying. While I get she’s not your favorite, you are writing her seriously out of character by only showing one aspect of her personality. You might want to watch the Viz dub. That said I totally agree with how you handle Ryoga. I’m not sure why others were complaining about, he was always reckless and ignored joe own responsibility in his own actions. Other than that the story has been very entertaining even if future Minako might be jumping the gun.

One thing I have NEVER understood is how come “to be the best” is some a childish or ignoble reason for pursuing a “craft” I mean look at olympians or Chess masters, or some chefs, or some musicians. They love what they do so they want to be the best.

I really dislike your decision, to have Ryuga randomly end up killing someone, sure it's realistic, but Ranma 1/2 isn't meant to be a realistic setting, it works by narrative rules, and those narrative rules, mean that randomly killing bystanders just don't happen even if should.

Wouldn't Ranma be able to build up his Chi again? He built up those Chi reserves from scratch, so while it should take him years if not decades to regain them, shouldn't he be able to do it in time.

Huh you'd think that Ranmas curse would also be consumed and or broken

A shame this hasn't been updated in such a while...

is this over

revive and update please this is really good

Bit sad this fic is still dead. I remember reading it ages ago and consider it to be one of the fics from the golden age of fanfiction. Back when authors put tons of time and effort into stories for the sheer joy of it. Sadly I would say 90% of all these stories ended up abandoned just like this one. Great idea's and amazing cross overs all left unfished.

You will likely never get this, but I will give this review. The story was great, yet I did not understand why you stopped writing. As it was not hard to see a eventual ending arriving, you did not have to write the entire Sailor Moon series until the final season, only offer modified info. A real shame it was clearly abandoned, it was a great story...

Neo-Serenity & Endiymon somehow escape the guards & go back in time to recruit their younger selves

Wow... that was dark. Just turning Ryouga into a murderer all of a sudden right sure...

well, an interesting story, sure enough, but the stupidity you've got going with the so-called "locked time lines" is pretty ridiculous. even using fantasy logic they don't make sense.

Update. Update update update. Seriously this is one of the more interest king five I've read. Update.

Please update this fix it is amazing.