Aw so cute! You NEED to make another chapter!

Oh! Me likey! I hope you're planning on writing a story as a companion to this! That would be so awesome!

Nitpick: Her wardrobe reflects who she is, it doesn't reflex.

Good job!

Super Cute!

I like how you showed both of them and what they think they 'are' and how impressions can be wrong. Great last line.

VERY nice...

The contrasting is very cool and though this piece is short it's absolute dynamite, the ending line in particular packs a remarkable punch. :-)