Not what I would consider an epic tale, but one that is true to the spirit of the cartoon and also goes the extra mile to insert here and there some factoids from the show.

This is powerful. Hank must listen to Sheila or he has to lose.

Absolutely wonderful.

This has got to be the best fan fic for this series that I have read thus far. I actually felt like I was there among them and this would make for such a good episode if they still made the cartoon series. Very enticing, and dramatic and the characters are very well written out. Thank you for this. Needed a D&D fix xD

Absolutely loved it! An awesome story, I enjoyed every chapter. I especially liked your little Venger/Sheila/Hank love triangle bit you had going at the end there. This story has been added to my favorites.

What a great story, beautfiully written and carefully planned. Some of your imagery made you sound like a pro.

My only criticism is that I was a little confused when you chose to show the epic (and it was epic) climax from the POV of Venger (i.e. the antagonist). Wouldn't it have been more dramatic to perhaps use Shiela's POV?

Wow that was good. The hero skates close to the edge. The bad guy does something nice. Oh, and Shadow Demon came back. Didn't see that one coming at all. I thought he was gone forever. Oh, and the Sheila/Venger moment was rather touching.

This is interesting. So like Sheila to try to help no matter what. I like what is happening in your story and where it is going. I can't wait to see how it ends. Does Sheila go with Venger? Does Hank fall to evil?

Power corrupts, and ultimate corrupts ultimately. So someone told me once and I believed it. This story is definitely a case in point. Hank's intentions of defeating Venger are good, but at what price? Already he has turned on the others and even Sheila is obviously worried. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Oh, the beginning part about Sheila's reaction to this and her love for Hank was right on character. Thank you Rana for a great chapter! I just hope the rest of the story lives up to it!

Oh, wow, this is awesome. I do hope you finish it! :)

Hank, wow! He is certainly in trouble here. I really enjoyed the part about him questioning DM and their place in the Realm. Sheila is worried about him, which is good. Keep writing, I love this story!

Wow, quite a story (DRAGON'S GRAVEYARD was always my favorite episode).

Please update soon!

Heh...Nobody puts Venger in a corner! This chapter has really put me in the mood to re-watch The Dragon's Graveyard episode now, especially the last line. Looking forward to your next post.

Wow. Intense. Well done.

Hell of a story so far. Hank is going down a dark path and his doesn't appear to have any intention of turning back. Meanwhile, Venger is down but not out. I'm looking forward to a re-match between Hank and him.