I like your review, but there needs more sex appeal.

I liked your fanfiction but there wasn't enough sex appeal.

Right...i hope more work from you!

hey, i liked it!

wow, this was trully beautiful...brought me to tears T_T

that was...good!

i can see them breaking down like that

Sweet. Very sweet. However, I thought Kallen had lost her memories of Nunnally, and thinks Rolo is Lelouchs' brother along with everyone else? But I do find the scenario quite plausible and I pray with a dying-burn-in-hell-you-motherfucker passion that these two end up together 'cause C.C. lost her memories (yes!) and Lelouch really has no one else to turn to for comfort. We'll see how it plays out, ne? Anyways, LOVED IT!

Good! I dont think its to out of character... maybe Lelouch would bemore cold but its a good fic..

Keep writing

Ja ne!

thats a really good start hope to read more soon. Keep it up.

pretty sweet fic!

Actually, this is surprisingly in-character for a first fic.

Lelouch, understandably, is broken. Part of him is in denial, part is in despair, and he's completely lost focus.

Kallen likely wouldn't have known that Nunnally was still in the building, but due to their conversations, she's close to Nunnally and would also mourn her death.

Kallen would also have understood what Nunnally's death meant to Lelouch, especially considering episode seven of R2.

All in all, you captured the appropriate emotions and responses well. Do feel free to continue this fic if you like, you've got at least one willing reader, and probably several more.

Short and powerful. I thought you conveyed all of the feelings in that moment really well. Good job!

This was really good.

Ever since I saw the episode, I've been wanting to know what happens to Lelouch.

Very good story.

Aw, I loved this, I really did. Though I assume Lelouch would be somewhat more frantic and gungho!revenge, I love your take on what might become of him and Kallen. This was a very good first Geass fic, so kudos on that, and in all honesty, it doesn't -seem- all that OOC. I adored this. Poor Lelouch, and poor Kallen D;