That was quite interesting

This was do cute

It's cute. I really like it. Kotoko is a bit more sensible than she usually is. It's good.

Awww! This was really cute! I loved it! :D

beautiful and fun :P

thanks

wow this one is really good i got into it and i loved the ending! ... all i can say is wow

i think this was too long, i missed out the first bit, and also the big chunk at the end. you should have cut it and put it into different chapters.

Aww... This is so cute! Hahas. Cinderella. ;P .

Shiroi(:

How cute! I really love this story!

but one line made me laugh really hard:

“That’s me! Now, Kotoko-chan––err, I mean, Cinderella, we must get you to Onii-chan’s––err, I mean, the Prince’s ball.”

L.M.A.O.

hello ,nice they're dream is cinderella..?

nice

nice!

nice!

nice!

nice!

nice!

i like the way you presented it...

it's so unique!

so wonderful!

so amazing!

This was cute...it's kinda hard to write a fanfic for Itazura na Kiss because it is kinda the perfect story...everything goes how you want it to...but this was still cute and refreshing to read...

omg! ur awsome i love this anime and i love the manga too. u did a great job with this story i really hope u do more.

wow..what a great story! aH..I remebered the classic waltdisney cinderella cartoon...ah man...and that last part was a brilliant ideea...the irie and kotoko's kiss was really cute too ;)...really good work! And yay...someone finally wrote an itazur na kiss fic...maybe i'll stop being lazy and write one too :D...good job!

Oh I love Cinderella. I made a story like this for Shugo Chara, and it's going great! Well I'm glad there is finally a Itazura Na Kiss section in this place. I absolutely loved your story, especially the very end. Very creative!