Ahhh poor Roxy ; v ; jkfdsk Riku you psycho jerk-/chokes

Jesus. Shudders.

This is amazing. You are amazing.

Please excuse me while i go barf out the excess of awesomeness in my body. /_/

This story was phenomenal. It was well written, the story flowed and the word choice was excellent. The events were perfect, I expected a smut filled rape story with plenty of action, passion, and kinks, but I found something completely different. Your story had more depth than the type of story mentioned above. Horror is certainly the correct genre. The actions of the antagonist were horrific. But The best part of this fiction was the devastating ending. It had the perfect amount of foreshadowing, enough to just warn the readers of the tragedy that was to occur. I applaud you for your work.

why did you stop? :( and why doesnt riku like boys?

weird...? I like it n.n

OH OH i know whats wrong with Riku!

Hes in denial. You can tell because he is treating and acting Roxas out to be a girl so he is clearly in denial that he is in fact gay, he is probably disgusted by the fact so is trying to prove it by taking Roxas and dressing him up andtreating him like i girl so he can prove him to himself he is straight,

Am i right?

...Ow. Ow. Owowowowow. Holy crap I'm REALLY glad that he blacked out when he did D:! Poor Roxas...creepily good and painfully compelling.

~Tekko

My word. o_o It's probably very wrong but I like this. XD Creepy!

Wow. O.O

This is somehow still hilarious.

LOL CASTRATION. XD I've never actually seen someone brave enough to write that.

This story was crazy! Riku being a pretty boy lover, and roxas getting castrated really takes the cake so this is an amazing piece of work.

holyKiraholyKiraholyKira...

...did he...riku didnt, did he?

oh...wow

nonetheless, i think its well as a one-shot if you formatted it that way. cliffhangers actually make me happy XD

so...

i suppose Riku had some new fetish, eh?

dear Kira, is Sora next?

I.. *in shock* O.o

That was weird..

And why is psyco Riku such a sexy bastard. damn him.

Did Riku just fucking cut Roxas' cock off? O.O? -spazzes-

They always said that sex would change you.