How many times is she going to remind him that she isnt allowing him to be dad? Thats the third time shes told him that hes not allowed to tell her im sure hes got it by now. And how log does she think she can keep this from katie? And when katie does find out she probably isnt goig to be happy with her mom... has she not thought about that?

Thats kinda harsh i mean its her fault and her mothers fault not rickys. He tried and they didn't give him even half a chance.

... kinda childish of her not to let ricky into their daughters life... to not even let him try. He probably thought she put the baby up for adoption and thats why he never called.

I think you've tried to make Amy a big bad more confident person but really you've just turned her into a bitch, in my opinion that is. She's all "you chose not to be a part if her life" blah blah blah but Ricky hasn't even said a wiped about wanting to be in Katies life. He literally only said "shes beautiful". Also Amy losing her so soon and quickly a bit farfetched but I can see why you needed that to happen for Ricky to find the girl. Lastly, here ricky is surprised to see Amy but only two chapters ago he was in the office with her and the lady called her name aloud. And she ran away but saw him. So he saw her too. For these reasons along with the ones in my previous reviews, I would only give this story a 1 or 2 out of 5 stars. Those are mostly because you did out forth the effort to at least write a story (and because I think your decision to remove Ben from the plot was pretty awesome though you did reintroduce him here as a pointless tagalong to go pick up Katie but I digress.)

1. The hiding under a sweatshirt thing was out of character for Amy. 2. You could add more description or something; you need more filler than just all of this dialogue.

I'm also assuming you either didn't know or didn't want to include anything regarding Mimsy's 'condition'. (Alzheimer's) Since she acts rather...well...normal in this story.

I assume this was written before John was born so you-the authordidn't know he was...well a John and not a Katie. Or did you just rather they had a daughter?

I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOONER CONSIDERING IT'S MORE THAN A YEAR SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE...IT'S AN EXCELLENT STORY AND I WANT TO KNOW HOW THE THINGS GO BETWEEN AMY AND RICKY AND KATIE...

Continue this pleaseeeeeeeeeee!

your story is very good cant wait for the next chapter you have a ver big gift of writing its amazing

this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

this is a good story when are you going to update it.

plz keep wrting

Loved it!

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yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.