Well that was just fantastic. You are officially my new favorite author xD now, if you don't mind, I'm going to search through your profile for more stories. I'm sure they'll be amazing as well. Ta-ta for now! :)

A shy Axel?! How unexpected yet cute. I love this story!

Oh that was a very cute idea and it turned into some... ehem. Lovely smut. I adore your writting.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Sooooooooooooooooo cute :D

Amazing one-shot! I loved every bit of it :P I could probably read it over and over, yet never get tired of it... and I don't just mean the smut aspects of it. The characterizations were perfect in every detail—I loved all the irony. Axel being the bad ass and Roxas being sweet, yet together, Axel is really the big softy and Roxas is all aggressive 'nd shit. Awesome.

I was thoroughly entertained throughout :) Axel sitting in the tree with his camera is so damn stalker-ish yet fucking hilarious. Roxas' strip show... xD I loved that so much, and Axel's reactions made it even better. Gotta wonder what would've happened if Roxas really went through with his masturbation plan ;) The dialogue and interaction between the two was also brilliant. You seriously have an amazing grasp on these characters.

And, of course, the smut was wonderfully written. No one can complain about that ;)

Overall, probably the most entertaining one-shot I've read thus far. It was hilarious and adorable and I find it absolutely perfect :P Thanks so much for writing and sharing it with the world! You have amazing talent.

That was so damn hot! :] Loved it!

Crap, that was HOT! XD I love it!

Take care! :D

VERY nice. Good move with giving Roxas a touch of dominance. And good story development. I couldn't tell if this was only going to be a voyeur fic or something until he fell out of the tree.

Oooh! Make MOAR plz! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ !

I loved it!

LOL a shy Axel. Too adorable.

this just cracked me up XD i loved it wish there were more chapters

The best! Lemon! Ever! Whew!

Love a devious Roxas! Though I would be interested in seeing little 'snapshots' of the next 4 years for them...

And here we have a story of the body AND the heart! It just keeps getting better and better :)

I must be stalking you with what I'm about to say, but I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ROXAS!