Just a quick review/correction;

It's supposed to be, venomous poison, not emerald poison. But, it matched the whole Axel POV in third person. Other than that, it's an awesome story.

Wow. An AkuRoku fic (my OTP)...on AkuRoku Day...set to one of my fav songs...? *sque! GLOMP!*

*Ahem* A wonderful fic. I especially love the twisted ending! Leave it the way it is.

that was such a good akuroku! but it was sad at the end... ;_; i wanna see wut roxas was thinking plz! 3

Oh, poor Axel! Roxas is being a ba- no, let's not swear. But it would be really interesting to hear Roxas' side of all this. Is he in love with Axel yet got that stupid 'I'm not gay' complex? Does he despise him? Is he indifferent? Now I sound like an advert?

On another note; dammit! I was thinking of doing a Poison themed Akuroku fic, and now it's already been done. Oh well. *shrugs* wasn't like I'd started it anyway. But write more! Please

I absolutely love this story!

I feel so sorry for poor Axel...

And the song matches really well with the story ).

All with all, great story, worth a fave!

Great job. I need to look this song up; I've never heard it before. Though... most of the songs I come across through song-fics like this one I've never heard before. (XD) I guess it comes with growing up listening to American Country music and Contemporary Christian music. {smiles sheepishly} Anyways, need to look up this song! That, and figure out just what the HELL is wrong with my stupid, piecea CR-P! iPod! {death glares iPod} STUPID THING DOESN'T WANNA CHARGE! (DX)

ooh no. this is lovely. wonderful. :) dark, a nice change from some of your other stuff.

good job, nature induced depression works well. ;)

Hey, loved the song fic (first I read, lol) anyways, hmm...I found it a little different from most of the other Akuroku, where Roxas came off as a total dick, and poor Axel, I really felt sorry for him, but I must say, I really do love the song Poison, and ended up listening to it while I read this.

Overall, while it was different than usual, it was still really good, and I think the differences in it made for a nice change :D

Okay, I'm going to just shutup now, 1st review and all...god I sound/feel like a total newb...w/e.

~Myth

Well, I liked it. So ha.

i love how you wrote this. its so cute, yet real, and its so romantic and sad. I WANNA SEE IT IN ROXYS POINT OF VIEW! pleasE?xD

Very bittersweet, and sorry about not finishing this for days - my internet decided to die COMPLETELY on me.

Very nice, even if it's sad

i think you need to continue this... but i guess thats just my opinion.

Awesome song, you beat me to writing a songfic to it. Congrats, lol.

Pooka: But but...it's half finished.

M...mines horrible. Not getting posted on here. Yours is good, I like it. _

Pooka: Meh, Fallen's lazy and wont post it.

Ignore her. -shifty eyes-

LOVES!

Fallen and Pooka

Well, it's good. Yer a *teensy* bit out of practice, but donm't stop! Your writing is still incredible. :D

And 8/13 was my birthday. :D What luck. :P

You have the i and /i around the italics.

AND THIS WAS SAD IT NEEDS A HAPPY SEQUEL MAYBE. :O