Omg this is great and I love how you included Alex personality ooo is maggie and Alex going to be a thing I'm so excited I finally found a good Alex rider x OC fix to read I atually love this fic already your such a great writer I'm writing a Alex rider fic arm but it's nowhere as good as this

I liked most of this story. I’m sorry though, but Alex losing that fight was total BS in my opinion.

Yeah... there’s no way he should’ve lost that fight.

Good

Naauuuu. Theres no more! Im kinda bummed alex lost to the chunky guy.. Doesnt seem likely.. But i do so badly wish to know what their reactions to alexs history are! Bummer. Oh well. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. I wish it had the next chapter. Lol.

OMG this is amazing, I love it! Please update, I really want to know what happens. And the way you wrote Alex is perfect, you really caught his character.

This is really good! Like no joke, you wrote Alex's character on point and the plot is amazing. Please, PLEASE update. his is really great don't stop.

So I stumbled upon this completely by accident, I was just stalking Alex Rider fanfics when THIS appeared and it was just beautiful among all the other crappy ones. Anyways you probably don't even ipen Fanfiction anymore, but this is a really good story and I honest-to-God wish you'd completed it :)

Please, please, please update! This is absolutely amazing! I love Maggie and how she notices odd things about Alex. You left us a major cliffie! What will they find out? How will they react? Will he tell them anything? Please give us a tidbit!

I can't wait for more!

NOOOOO! Stupid cliffhanger. *Has tantrum*

This seems like a seriously awesome story! Update soon...

:)

oMG it has been so long since I've actually gotten hooked to a fanfic enough to want to read the unfinished bit. I do hope that you're able to uodate soon, this is very interesting especially since I'm 100% sure that they'll be caught, most likely by Alex nontheless.

Okay, I kind of got away from my review there but I just wanted to say thank you for writing and keeping up with this story.

*stares very seriously at the end of the chapter*

Things to read? So do I. I very desperately have things to read. Something that includes the next chapter.

*folds hands and proceeds to wait patiently for the next installment*