| Reviews for Tomato Soup |
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Indra Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/17/2019 I think that one of the best parts of this story, is that there is no real bashing. Yes there's arrogance, but only to add to the story. I also liked the portrayal of nearly all of the characters, it felt realistic and unlike much of the content on this site. I look forward to your next work, if there is one. |
MarkAntimony chapter 1 . 1/5/2019 Always nice to see ninja being properly sneaky about things. Subtle!Naruto is very appreciated. Karin definitely deserves not to deal with all the Uchiha crap. |
Vivaan chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 Brilliant. |
Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 Wow. Nice. Honestly kind of prefer this to the canon route. 'Redemption' is virtuous and all, but Sasuke treated everyone around him like shit. It rubs me raw that he basically got out with no consequences for doing so, and so a story in which the two people he treated worst get revenge (by exploiting his own arrogance, no less) is well-deserved. It's also a pleasure to see a dark!Naruto story in which he uses brains over superpowers. (Or a Naruto story in which he uses brains over superpowers at all, considering canon...) I, for one, look forward to our orange-clad overlord. :) Very nice fic. |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017 cool |
Steavatron chapter 1 . 1/6/2017 I really liked this. 'Twas a nice read. Makes me kinda wish there was more. Would be a really enjoyable read. You've got an interresting writing style. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Nice, thank you for sharing this gem. |
BlueRubyBeat chapter 1 . 1/1/2016 That was something to read. Naruto was quite a character in this and him teaming up with Karin was interesting. Loved how he wasn't all nice (though good to read that at times). I like how they poisoned Sasuke and used his death to take over the world. Cute one shot! ;) |
ThousandMastery chapter 1 . 12/1/2015 Sasuke isn't stupid enough to eat food (even tasty) prepared by his fangirls. Really. While NaruKarin isn't bad, Sasuke would definitely notice and kill her. |
insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 11/13/2015 Goddamn, that was awesome. Wish it was more than just a oneshot but still one of the best oneshot II have ever read |
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 4/7/2015 awesome! |
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 3/22/2015 As dark/weird/creepy as an evil Naruto is, I'm more hung up on what we know now (but maybe didn't when you wrote this) is Uzumaki clan incest. |
moon so bright chapter 1 . 12/13/2014 Awesome. |
OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 naruto the way kishibaka should have made on the outside, devious mastermind on the all who would suspect the loudmouth idiot of being behind it all? |
Agnidivya chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 You are my Hero! This is how Naruto should have been form the beginning. |