Harry making an oath about his truthfulness when he lied about the philosophers stone being destroyed?
Whoops i think...

I hate reading great fanfics and when it getting good the author stop updating , sigh

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

Hope you carry on some time

I really loved the story but an sad you did not continue it. Nor did we see or hear about the relationship side more nor its development (like if or how they are ensure not to have kids too soon)

I hope you continue this

Very different. It already got my attention!

Since the fic is abandoned i will leave my own fan based ending.

Lucious Malfoy was mind raped by the twins before they had him transfer all his vault contents to the Potter twins before he died. (like the Assassin they reprogrammed). Draco tried to retaliate and was killed along with his Crab and Goyle by Bella, Pansy was seduced and made a pet/Toy for Bella.

Twins raided Dumbledore's office and finding his notes and with the other Headmaster paintings they found out he used Fawkes to become Immortal thru used dark binding spell to keep Fawke's loyal, using the Feather from the Holly Wand and ashes left behind they were able to fo forcefully summon Fawkes force a burning and break Dumbledore's control. Fawkes after recovering kidnapped Dumbledore into the twins trap where after they finally broke his mind to the hidden part they found out what was hidden and the Flamel's where his accomplices. They used a ritual to drain Dumbledore magic and shared it between the twins, Ginny and Gabby. They made a trap and caught the Flamel's and found out they were playing both sides to maintain balance and play their chess game. Twins mind raped/drained them and had them as well as Dumbledore who was now a squib kissed by a dementor the Gray captured.

When OrderMinistry tried to take down another wards the Gray captured their curse breakers and imprisoned them, Ginny forced Bill to swear a magical oatth to never attack Gray Faction wards again or assist in them without permission from the Gray.

Ron tried to attack and kill the twins but Ginny took him down killing him the process. Hermione was removed from Hogwarts by her parents and sent to another school after they got a letter from the twins that flat out told them their daughter has a cult member like devotion to authority figures and never questions anything. Neville joined the Gray and ended up with Sally Anne Perks.

The twins tracked down and got all of Voldermot Horrorcrux's and like with Ginny they stripped them of their corse and shared them with their inner circle. They hunted down and killed DE's via tracking magic using the Dark Mark. Twins attacked Voldermot base with their allies and he was killed by getting hit at the same time from killing curses from the twins but only after Bella held him under Crucio for several minutes, with his death all marked DE died.

Fudge/Ministry, Fuge was sacked after Dumbledore/Malfoy deaths and was tried for treason and got the dementor kiss. The Gray took over the ministry easily and pushed equal rights for all changes. Narcissa was in charge and gave birth to a daughter who was fathered by Harry.

Harry and Lucy never were able to have a child together, but Harry was able to have several with Gabby and Lucy was able to get Ginny pregnant several times as well using a special polyjuice potion keyed to Harry to get sperm genetically based from Lucy, all their kids were like the twins being Vampire/Vella like. Daphne/Tracy and Hannah/Susan did the same with the polyjuice trick. Tonks using her metamorph powers was able to get Fleur pregnant several times, Fleur equally bonded to the twins while Gabby was focused on Harry just like Ginny was focused on Lucy. Bella/Alicia focused on each other with Pansy as their willing sex toy. Luna/Su Li went the polyjuice way with each other.

Eventually all the inner circle passed on willing, only Harry/Lucy/Gabby/Ginny/Alicia/Bella/Tonks/Fleur remained behind staying immortal. They moved around the world taking muggle classes (like in Twilight with Tonks/Fleur in the guardian role) as well as seeing the world, with the aid of the stone de-aging wasn't a problem along with special alchemical based glamor's they were never recognised.

Them going after the stone to protect the trio was OOC if them and they knew it was a set up/test for them, should of just let the trio go goy hurt/killed anf used the incident to take Dumbledore down a few pegs. Seems like the author perverted his own characters to force a canon event even thou its OOC if how the twins are portrayed.

Wait so their bodies are stronger than bears which is stronger than the average wizard, but they have to stick to ‘basic spells’ because their body cannot handle the magic power?

what the fuck is 'pocking'? like seriously why the fuck?! Is 'pocking' supposed to be 'fucking' or something? Get your shit together, bruh. quickly too, cus fucking hate 'pocking;

i would recomend using some variations in italics and bold, also punctuation to help get emotions across, would greatly increase the quality of the dialogue

Awesome fic to bad it's abandoned.

Damn awesome story! Though it could have been thrice as long if added a BT detail and the lemons written. Please update this story. Don't abandon it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Update Please

good story to read and wonder if the story is dead or not?