| Reviews for Angels Fall First |
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  barricade chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 epic I love it. nice job! |
 Ereeves23 chapter 3 . 8/10/2016 very good story. good old optimus going protective farther mode |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/12/2015 I liked the story but the last few chapters were basically a rip off of Rise of The Fallen battle scene . Except with a girl and sex . Sam and Mikayla had that scene ( well it was implied ) but still , it was a rip off over the battle scene . Any way good story . I would give it a ( hmm ) 4 out of 5 . -1 for rip off . |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/20/2014 Sooooo she just turned into a femme robot one for a single night and that's it? I was hoping you would come back to that. Never the less, wonderful story :) |
| StormRaven333 chapter 16 . 4/10/2013 AWwWwWw...another great fic you pulled out of the hat there! You've become my favourite author now! ;3 |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/23/2013 man... this story should totally have a sequel... now im sad :( i mean come on, what about the thing with her silver-blue cybertronian form, you're not gonna further that with a sequel focusing on the third movie, or a totally different adventure? lame -_- |
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/23/2013 im a little disappointed you didnt put mudflap and skids in this story i love them XD especially skids (assuming he's the green one) |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/23/2013 YAY JETFIRE! i love jetfire, he's all kinds a senile XD |
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/23/2013 im not sure what car i would be, but if i could be a cybertronian femme, i'd want to be magenta (but a bit more purple) with flames (stripes or just plain are BORING, no offense to bumblebee) that were sapphire blue and bright aqua :D vehicle wise, i think i might wanna be a fighter jet or something like that, cuz flying sounds AWESOME, or better yet, a triple changer :D i enjoy vertigo LOL XD awesome story, btw |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/23/2013 stories where optimus falls in love with a human girl will always be my favorite :) i just wish OTHER authors would quit ALWAYS making the girl blonde with blue eyes i mean optimus is NOT a typical human guy, it not right to just ASSUME he wants what most human men seem to want, which is one of the reasons i like this story. BRUNETTES RULE! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/22/2013 after reading about optimus' likes and dislikes about women, I think i could make him very happy (not joking i meet almost all the requirements :D :D :D) LOL XD course its likely this author is wrong, especially since optimus prime isnt even real ;( but hey, a girl can dream right ;) anyway, great story :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2013 FINALLY an OC chick who isnt blonde with blue eyes POWER TO BRUNETTES! :D :D :D |
| Sophie Stands Tall Always chapter 16 . 2/25/2013 NOOOOOOOOOOO! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! COME ON PLEASE! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ BEFORE! PLEASE! |
| Sophie Stands Tall Always chapter 15 . 2/25/2013 AHHHHHHHH! OMG! GO ELIZABETTA! BRING OPTIMUS BACK TO LIFE! |
| Sophie Stands Tall Always chapter 13 . 2/23/2013 OMG! I DONT KNOW WAT 2 SAY! I 3 THIS! . |
