Awesome! This was a very good interpretation of Jareth and Sarah and one that most people unfortunately shy away from writing. She is stubborn at first but not so delusional that she keeps pushing him away just for the sake of pushing him away. He is intimidating and wants what he wants but is also not so desperate that he won't take no for an answer, he leaves and makes her realize what she wants to happen. Overall a really wonderful story and I have zero complaints :) Thanks for writing this!

Loved it!

Lovely ending. {Smiles} Nice story.

Oh ouch ... never call another man's name when in that position. ROFL.

That was quite an exit for him in this chapter ... with those parting words. Excellent chapter and great story so far. {Smiles}

THis is one of my favorite labryiinth ditties.

OOPS.

Well Sarah, what now?

Aww, this was a nice story.

However, I didn't really like the ending. You didn't tie things up. I wanted to know what her plans were going to be. Can you at least make a sequel? *hopeful grin*

Who. Sexy chapter.

Aww, this story is nearly finished. I am a bit sad.

"Already, her mind was wandering to the issue of his pants. Did they have a fly or something… how in world was she supposed to get them off of him?"

Great quote. :D

Oh.

*next chapter*

Oh, this was a great chapter! :O That moan at the end! Uh-oh...Sarah just ruined her chances...

Oh, steamy kissing scene. Love it!

Aw, poor Jareth! He just wants a lil' hanky panky!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I will add it to my favourites. :)

*moseys on over to chapter five*

Aww, a fairly short chapter. :(

*moves on*