I took a long break from reading fan fiction, and I never got to the end of your Deadly Sins series. I’ve only just finished it. Wow! I’ve been impressed with the maturity of your writing. I’m guessing you are 23/24 years old now. I wonder if you still think about these stories like I have?

Seems that Edward can't take responsibility for his own actions, ever. Interesting how someone else is always the cause. Bella has been his punching bag for so long, she doesn't even see what he's doing. He is also glamouring her in an attempt to own her again.

Okay... There's 3 stories!? This slut (bella) needs some help

What interesting alternate endings. I was sad to think in the original that all three of them died... After everything they went through to loose in the end was sad. In the alternate it was neat that they all became human after all those years I can only imagine that would take some serious getting used to... Thanks for the wonderful journey. :)

This series was amazing! Great plots, twists and turns, kept me on my toes the whole time! I loved both endings of this creative and heart wrenching. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing!

I have just finished your trilogy. It kept me transfixed for several days. I find it amazing that you were only 15 or 16 when you were writing this. You wrote as if you had actually experienced love lost and found. That is the true concept of this story, don't you agree? Anyway, I understand that you no longer write ff but I certainly hope that that you continue to write somewhere, or, even study it. Yours is a talent that should not be wasted.

This one is awesome as well! I had hoped you would give her the power to turm vampires into humans

But I do prefer the original ending xx

Good job xx I guess... this is now goodbye

Hey sweety!

This has got to be the best chapter you have ever written!

I truly do hope you pick up your writing again! You have a true gift!

I remember reading the very first story of yours... back in 2008 (it may have been earlier) Luxuria... you were so shy in your authours notes! So adorable! I am so glad I managed to get back into my old fanfic account and be able to reread this series.. despite not following you through to the end if your series... your stories. Never left my mind! Despite being 24 now (we are super old now)

Sorry I am rambling you probably don't even remember who I am!

I am mentioned in a couple of your chapters... I am the weird kid that would pester you with a bunch of song ideas and made you that advertisement thing for your stories

Anywho! Thankyou every so much for not deleted these! It has been brilliant to be able to relive my teeny boppy kiddie years again.. the memories that these brought back! All positive... thankyou Nia-ox!

Xx Love the awkwardly obessed teenybopper fan back from 2008 (or earlier)

But most if all... love from a super old fan

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I like both endings, each for a different reason. Thank you so much for sharing this trilogy with us.

im confused...why did Edward cheat on bella after he got his clean slate with bella? I thought he loved bella? so why would he cheat?
it seems like just a reason for the reader to not feel bad for him

This is a beatiful story. The whole thing, but it's sad that Jacob and Edward had to die, I still loved it. Thx for the stories, they were amazing.

holy crap that was one of the best series i have ever read. very good job and hope to see many more things from you in the feature.

Yo! You are probably not on fanfic anyymore, but such reviews should be notified to fanfiction adminsitrators and the sender should be blocked.

Abuse and insults should not be tolerated, be they in vocal or written form. If they don't like, they stop reading, the same as you do with a paper book.

What a lunatic!

OMG, THANK GOD. I honestly thought that the last one was the end and I was SO mad! I'm going to start reading this right now! :D :D :D

Oh my God this alternate ending brought me to TEARS! Damn girl, WONDERFUL!