tifa hissing saying telling yelling to cloud get your chocobo head idiot ass back here right now and say that you love me that you want me that you miss me

tifa to cloud I just spoke to reno it seems that you have something to tell me

OMG.. so sad... Cloud didn't had the guts tell her... well... I knowmit's hard 'cause I have a crush already... :D

AW!

How sad

Oh wow. I have tears in my eyes and my heart is breaking. That was absolutely one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read in my life. My heart was pounding and then simply stopped when Reno came it. Well done, Mystic's young ward. Well done.

Oo, Renzo you romantic sap! (I was gonna say something much ruder, but then again, you're my friend, so... Anyways, sorry if you feel upset about that) I sort of pity Cloud in this, so no worries, I'm not gonna bash him. (Not here anyways. In my head I'm screaming a LOT of things at him, and I'm struggling with myself so I won't put anything in here... Whoops, you weren't supposed to know that) I love the ending when Cloud just went off saying that she probably already knows. Lol! Keep it up!

Dawn

There's no use, right? You keep on being a romantic sap XD

If it wasn't for you I would never read this kind of things.

Now I'm off to play some videogames to satisfy my daily need of violence.

And yeah, I loved the story. I like the Reno-Tifa stories, but in my fics she's always with Cloud. It's easier to write XD

Nicely written.

Aranae

I really liked it. Nicely written, great emotion, overall well done piece. I like the title choice too. Describes everything quite well.

Mystic