You are such an amazing writer. The way you make Harvey such a bitch but SO relatable and Cleave so creepy but so lovable is incredible. I am so seriously impressed, you're just so great!

they are soo cute! and like i said before ying yang! but then it's reversed weeeeeeelllll yeah it does:)

Randomly, I decided to totally comment right here, in the middle of this fic after reading your first fic and not finishing this one and...

The white tictacs DO taste of Marshmellow before the full on minty awesomeness! I havent met ANYONE who agrees with me til now! Well...I suppose I still havn't 'met' anyone, but thats not the point...

Oh, and i love ur story (ies), though I've only read one and a half. Very entertaining, very funny, very original, and I like Cleaveland. He's rather chipper, isn't he? ;)

Awesome...just thought I'd let you know about the tictacs. It made me laugh. Lol, I'm so weird.

RO

XD Awee That was fun, cute little alone time with Cleveland, loving the last chapter ;). Man, you write so good (me with my uncivilized cave man language) But, what I think the best part to your writing is, that you give your character such personality; the narrative is something I always admire, I'm horrible at writing in first person, so naturally I fell in love with your girl's witty comments when she narrates XD. I'm addicted to your series, I hope you realize you've gained a stalker (If you don't have a closet full of them now)

Enjoying their interaction. Immensely. Especially when they're not running away from someone (said Batman) and just bantering with each other.

Ho my gawd. That has to be one of the best sex scenes I've read in a very long time. It was bee-you-tea-full and well worth the wait. Wowza... There is now a permanent grin on my face. At least for the rest of the night.

wow...

that's all I can say. wow.

oh dang! getting racy.

ow with the head!

that jerk.

sigh.

i think she might've made him uncomfortable. oh.

that jerk!

he is so desperate. poor guy.

sounds like everything is right in Jokerville. )

I have to tell you- I absolutely love your writing style. I adore it. It's great.

I like Nightmare Before Christmas.

so she's in his bed forever. what does that get her?