At the end all I could think of was

Smuty smut wonderful random smuttacular smut blah blah
Silence...
"So did you fold the clothes like I asked you too?"

Are there more of these made by you. Any Jazz/Prowl robo-smut stories you recommend?

the only thing unhealthy i see about this is that Jazz is so unwilling but does it anyway. if they spoke about it, or Jazz came to understand Prowl's reasons (cuz there are serious psychological issues that can be dealt with using BDSM play, if done CORRECTLY) then would be better. communication and all that.

aww poor Jazz i really actually liked it PJ rock :)

Um, wow.

That was a little...disturbing. But also really, really good. I've never seen a story like this either actually, but I've read some where Prowl is (sexually) submissive - not to quite this degree though... But I can honestly say that he probably needs to loose control sometimes, or he'll snap, as Jazz implied.

Poor Jazz. :(

This was a well-thought and remarkably done fanfic. I love your approach to the situation. Pretty much any relationship that has something that serious hanging unspoken has the potential to become unhealthy, even if it's striking a balance at the moment.

One thing that struck me about this was how close the "game" comes to the painful reality of their situation. It would be entirely conceivable for either of them to find themselves truly in these roles. Thanks for sharing this.

Holy crap... Wow...

It was cool! I liked it! I just have one embarrassing question... Embarrassing for me, not you.

What does BDSM stand for? _

I still havent learned it yet...

You tackled this subject very well with the added view of Jazz. Though I can sort of see Jazz seeking out someone who doesn't get so wrapped up in these games (which would probably add unwanted drama but stuff like that does happen). And Prowl... maybe he needs to reexamine why it is his need for the BDSM to get realer.

This is an amazing story. It's great to see things from Jazz's point of view. It really seems that Prowl uses these games to releave his burden and stress. I can't help but wonder if all of these games would cause Jazz his own worry and stress, and to look around for something to releave them and not let Prowl know. Something to keep his sanity intact. Anyway, great story, and I look forward to reading more.

I actually appreciate you taking the time to delve into Jazz's psychology so thoroughly with this topic. Bondage and S&M is enjoyed in quite different ways by the 'top' and the 'bottom' and when one is demanding/needing it the other doesn't necessarily WANT to always do such things. I think you hit the nail on the head, quite frankly, with this couple.

An enlightening read. Thank you for sharing.

This may be horribly wrong, but I think, if Prowl was human, he'd have a t-shirt that says "Sticks and stones may break my bones, but whips and chains excite me. Tie me up and throw me down, and show me that you like me" Either that, or he'd be like Anastacia from John Ringo's Kildar series, a serious masochist.

I agree that Jazz would be casually kinky and Prowl might have a deeper, psychological need to take these games very seriously. And yes, real-life doms are often very reluctant, especially when things escalate, going along only to appease the other.

What's unhealthy here isn't the game; that's all well and fine. Many adults play such games safely. What's unhealthy is that Prowl seems to need to be tortured on a periodic basis to deal with stress, and is needing more and more pain, and they haven't talked about why. It likely touches on something he'd rather hide, hasn't explored about himself, or may even be completely repressing and not aware of. BDSM in and of itself is not unhealthy (in my opinion, having some experience with it myself), but is very easy to mis-use, resulting in dub-con situations and miscommunications, sometimes injuries and psychological damage.

Still, it is nice to see the dom being reluctant. It's FAR less creepy that way, at least.

Nice job!

Wow!

A most interesting way to take a look at this.

Your writing is very powerful. Carefully crafted and well done.

Thank you for sharing.

i can do no more than say wow

"leaves to go cry now"

I really, really enjoyed this. The glimpses into Jazz's mind were enlightening and heart wrenching. I like the idea of an unwilling dom (like you, I don't think I've read that before). Thanks for the great fic. :D