I could see what Amber coming from to save the world but that means taking people's partners away who are close like family members, if someone who is thinking it would be okay to steal people's partners is being selfish. What would you do if someone decided to take your family away in "order to save the world" if that happens to me I wouldn't like it and told the person who decided to take your family away to think about how would they feel if it happens to them.

First of all, I deeply apologize because I noticed I haven't made a review since chapter 23...
Your story is frigging awesome and I love how you portray the different characters. I'm very curious about how things will continue and resolve! Especially if Hilary would be able to persuade the others into not beybattling (which I think is quite improbable, but let's see!)

Yaaayyyy so happy to see a new chapter! Feels like things are about to heat up too so already dying for the next one!
Also, it's silly, but I love the little "Amber & her tea" snippets, almost feels like I'm having a lovely cup myself haha!
Please keep writing!

The story is coming to its climax I can't wait for the epic battle and end of the world schtick! You are a great writer and talented storyteller.

I get so excited whenever theres a new chapter of this story! It definitely made my night :D
I'm sure your other fans will also love it too :) Im already excited for the next chapter :D

Just caught up on the last few chapters. Been away from the fandom for a while. Look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!

Thank you for the update! I've been waiting for an update for months because I really enjoy this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
(I'm not good on leaving reviews but I'm trying)

Ahh I loved this. Your dialogue and descriptions are on point as usual.

Ian and Hilary's interactions are quite interesting since they haven't even been in the same space in the whole beyblading series, let alone interact with one another.

Something I didn't expect I was missing was Amber and Ian. I loved them throught SLTS and despite the plot being so different, I enjoy them so much.

One thing's for sure is that Eoin's act must be taken down (if it turns out like that - we'll see)

*holds breath* *exhales* finally Kai and the Blitz Boys!

Anyway, I can't wait for what's next :D

yesss! im so excited to see a new chapter! hehe tyson forgot that technology exists. poor ian! hope him and his team work things out :3

So you probably don't remember me, but way back when Internet 2.0 was happening, and old flash shrine websites about Beyblade were LIFE, I used to be an avid reader of your work, and it even inspired me to write my own fanfiction (as corny as it was, I refuse to re-read now on account of not wanting my spine to break when my body goes into uncontrollable spasms caused by all THE CRINGE haha) and even offered teenage-me some writing advice over MSN(!), which was very kind of you.
As such, I'm SO glad I decided to come looking through this website again, it's been YEARS and I can't believe you're still writing! About good old Beyblade! The nostalgia wave is drowning me!
Anyway,
This is a great GREAT story! Once I started, I was physically unable to stop reading it until I was literally too tired to keep my eyes open (which meant I had about 3 hours of sleep before getting an early train to London - which in turn meant I got to finish it during the trip WOO!)
I have since had some sleep, been to work, and am now home and relatively well-rested, so obviously, had to leave a review.
I do love your writing style, it's as if I'm watching everything happening as I go, like a movie. It's great to "see" Amber again, like an old friend I hadn't heard from in ages, and I love your portrayal of Kai, the "bromance" (is that the right word?) between Ian and Hillary, Mariam's nicknames for everyone are killing me, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Please never stop writing!

Not going to lie, the mentions of Mathilda and her team made my heart speed up a little. I like the scenes you lay out, especially enrique and julia in the beginning. showing enrique has depth. And Julia isnt just shallow. Will wait patietly for the following chapters. Good work!

Wow! what an amazing story! I binged the whole thing in a day. Just couldn't stop reading. Your writing is great and you've captured their personalities so wonderfully! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really, really love this story. The descriptions are great and the dialogue so natural - it's like a movie in my head.

Finally we get to see a bit more of Julia (and Enrique). She's one of my favorite characters out there and I enjoyed a lot her interaction with Enrique.

As for Amber, it's a surprise to see an opposite side of her, compared to SLTS. It definitely suits her for this story. I only wish she was more calm.

Aah another cliffhanger. Hilary and Ian need to sort this mystery with Eoin ASAP. I hope he doesn't do anything to Amber.

Anyway, great chapter :D

wow! that was a exciting story friend firstly,i thank u to make this i enjoyed reading this specially the way u r using the descriptive and narrative techniques.

if u have some free time read my stories and plz tell me how were they.

faithfully yours,
unaisa memon

This was great! I really liked Julia and Enrique's interaction, we usually don't see much of either of them in a lot of fics. Plus Eion's creeping on Amber's apartment? This can't be good. Great way to end the chapter and I'm excited to see what happens next!