hi,
I really liked your story. It was an interessting idea and well done. I only have one thing. If I remember correctly, it was mentioned in the Hathor Episode, that as soon as a symbiont is insert the change would be not reversible.

But I will categories it as artistic freedom.
;)
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Man this I was a great story. One of the best on this site.

I liked it well enough. I am afraid I can't say much meaningful. Very well written.

Wow, this was truly beautiful :) I enjoyed it really a lot. I am not a big fan of Unending but your story makes me like it a bit more.

That was an amazing story. I was very draw in to this story. This story kept me interested throughout the entire eight chapters. It was very good. You have a real talent for writing.

Great story! Though, I think it would have been an interesting twist if you had left Sam a jaffa.

Surprised that Cam would call it 'fun' that Sam and Teal'c had, unless if they didn't go into great detail on everything from those 3 days.

Very considerate of Vala to say that to Sam. Cali is so cute, I am happy that things worked out in the end for her, if it wasn't for Sam, she would no longer be alive.

I quite liked the question of rank and the comment of 'I do not have a rank' lol, Sam got her point across. Nice to find out how everything is going, and it is a good thing that Cali has Sepha looking over her.

A camping trip sounds like fun, too bad Teal'c declined. S'Mores!

Oh and a few chapters ago I had started to wonder if Sam would get a stomach wound that would destroy the pouch. I'm actually happy that it happened too.

I enjoyed the story and only wish I hadn't ended, but that happens with every story one reads that is very good. My favorite is Sam, as far as coupling... heh I don't know. I honestly don't, Sam/Jack, Sam/Daniel, Sam/Cam, I just don't see her with Teal'c. But I loved the connection between them in your story, bringing up that they have been through a lot together, may as well call them family _

SLITH

Cali is so confusing! The moment that the Jaffa took them out of their cell I was like 'what are the odds of this happening?' To have Cali run up to them and tell them it was all a shower just earlier.

Of course there will be pissed off mother dearest lol. Nice action happening, had a feeling that someone would be hit down. I was able to picture Sam spin into the air and land perfectly... and it had to be her bad shoulder to receive the hit.

Must say I felt my heart skip a breat and my breath catch at reading 'but a blur of speed and color came from beside the girl and absorbed the full burnt blast. Sam crashed down' and with the blood trail... damn. I could just see the look in Teal'c eyes at seeing that.

I KNEW IT! I knew that stone would come in handy, there is one hell of a fighter in Sam! Gosh the blood on his hands and arms... didn't expect the brush of the kiss.

*jaw drops* I did not see that coming at all - Cam, Vala and Dan! Loved how they explained it too. You bet Cali is Tok'ra! WHO-RAW!

SLITH

Thank you for finally telling her, however, it looks to have worked against them in the end. The girl is quite the hot head.

Love to give the girl a quick swift kick up the a$$.

SLITH

Hey, I bet ya Sam has forgotten about the stone and that it will be able to be used later on. Such as for stabbing someone lol.

Nice job on the 'Code for you're hurting like hell, right?' for him to agree. Nice to get that top up from Cali, I've been wondering if the food is such a good idea to eat, never know if it has been tampered with. However with their stomachs, cannot help it.

I really liked how Teal'c told Carter to lift her right arm just to have it proven that she did need the ointment. Gosh... that would such so much to feel the fabric being pulled away from the trying to heal skin.

And now... the conclusion.

SLITH

Frig... she is pretty vicious. Love to decapitate her.

Sounds like an amazing sight, and thing to be able to listen to. YAY! Action! A very nice amount of action I might add, GO CARTER!

Gosh... too bad the symboits cannot stop one from feeling very cold and very hot temperatures. Pant legs must be drenched, why did Teal'c react the way he had when her hand went onto his arm I wonder...

*winces* Yeah... both blows from that fall would hurt. Why not hold your hands out and take a few sips to replenish and how does Cali know of all of these things?

When Teal'c told her to clear her mind, I knew she wouldn't be able to do it. Loved how she brought it up and how he agreed but found a way for her to clear her mind just enough to reach the meditative state.

SLITH

*shivers* What a nightmare... to relive that event. Nice that Teal'c didn't go and panic when she had left, that he stayed behind. Thankfully Sam chose to be honest with him on how she felt instead of lieing and saying "I'm fine."

*squirms* That sounds so gross... feeling it move around in the abdomen to latch on into its necessary spots *shudders*

Kinda weird on how she found them so easily if you ask me, but at least Teal'c was able to take his medicine to re-cooperate from a disaster.

Nice to have the roles reversed with Sam watching out for Teal'c.

SLITH

Damn... sounds like quite a few deep cuts to have made that much of a puddle. Saw that coming for Teal'c to want Sam to be healed first, guys always looking out for the women. Very nice description on the way with the healing device fixing up the bone and cuts and aches. At least they got some food to continue on... I bet it tastes just as good as its name lol.

I didn't see the mind torture device coming, whenever seeing it being in use, you give a very nice description of what the receiver would be feeling. 'Sam threw her head back and screamed' gosh... I felt my heart rate pick up when I read that and did a double take. Especially on how Teal'c tried to get out of his restraints, too bad he didn't get out to possibly tackle her away from Sam.

Frig... Sam is in really bad shape, very considerate of Teal'c to give her his shirt. She is in a very bad frame of mind.

Ah crap... what does that witch have in mind for Sam & Teal'c?

SLITH

Oh... thats gotta suck to wake up in that type of condition. Damn the arms would be screaming.

Nice little conversation between the two of them, especially with the zats lol. Sounds like they are in quite the predicament with this woman... boy is she in for a surprise when she learns Apophis is gone.

'Watched Teal’c as she taunted Carter, noting how his jaw clenched as he strained at his bonds' I LOVED that. I always enjoy reading something where a story shows how protective the guys are of Sam.

Very nice way of doing the torture, it sounds excruciating. The Ripping a scream from her throat sounded... well it made be get a chill.

SLITH

Nice pace and characterisation