O_O very well-written! and yes, typos need to die!

too good for words, so just eat the cookies

I really enjoyed reading this. The way you described each of their traits in each others eyes was so like them. With so many of the LightxL stories I've read, the Light and L characters seem... fake. In short, you did a really good job.

I think I'm going to cry.:'(

This was absolutely beautimous. Adjective use, characterization - all perfect. Dang, too bad this is a oneshot... I think it would be a great prologue for a multichapter fic if you wanted too.

(*sigh*) But, alas...

Anyways. Keep up the great work! Definate favorite. :-)