I have never read something that captured the true personalities of both characters in such a detailed and accurate way. I have to say that if there were to be a sex scene in the book, I wouldn’t be able to tell the difference between this story, and that which would have been written by stephany Meyer herself. It’s truly a masterpiece!

Omg I love this so much can you make another one please!

I have been dying for this for months now! That was amazing and the rest I have no words for.

My favorite writer, by far...I salute you, Romanticidal Edwardian! 11/10/2015

Nice Story. :)

Excellent! More !

Very tastefully done with both of them. :)

yumm, wow, just imagining Rob, errr, Edward, ugh, good grief, think I just passed the fuck out. Oh, right great scene.

EWWWWWWWWWWW...DISGUSTING :(

Amazing! Both of them and I love your writing style, please write more!

Wowee, well we knew he would be back for more, hot sexy vampire that he is, yum, great story, short but to the point and love it a lot

That was nice, very sweet, tender, and certainly, virgin though Edward is, he would know how to make love to a woman, as much as he tried to keep visions of family members out of his mind, I am sure there were moments when they caught up with him and he seems the type of man who would seek out books to teach himself what to do.

liked it but i want to read more like with jacob too

it was amazing

Omigod that was the best I have ever read. You did something right because I have never written a review. Your attention to detail is impeccable! More please wow!