So beautifully written and so beautifully sad.

Beautifully written, painfully REAL.

Probably the darkest ATLA fic I’ve ever come across, but also the most beautifully written.

i love the metaphors so much, this is written so well, i love it.

I love your love for Aang ! xx

I'm finding your spin on Aang really interesting, just reminding us he was a teenage boy. I like this not very monk-like Aang so far, who knows where it'll go.

Yayyy Aang learns about Consent haha! We stan solid character development :P

Also can I just say this is so dark but I'm loving it? Something in my angst-addicted heart loves stories of children who fought a war inevitably growing to be just a little (a lot) fucked up. And even though they're all deeply, deeply flawed in their own ways and still so very *human* it's a tribute to the writing that I can't help but root for them 33

This is an old fic that I read years ago, but I just wanted to say thank you for writing this beautiful story. It kept me company all day today, and I greatly appreciate it. :)

Man Katara is a horrible Mother RIP Kya Lynn cuz you know in the future she bouta have some 'my mother sucked' stories to tell her bf jesus christ.

I don't know how many reviews you get nowadays, but I keep returning to this fanfic years after I first read it. Each time, as I've grown and learned things about myself and others, this story takes on different meanings. It's not underestimating to say this is my favorite piece of fiction on the Internet. Your writing inspired mine eight years ago. I'm glad to say it still holds its influence today.

Okay, dead Suki was harsh for me, but I love Kataang and there aren't a lot of long stories to choose from for it. But I loved this one. A lot. It was really well written.

This made me wanna cry! Loved this story, can't wait to read more of your works!

How old is Katara in this story?

This was a beautiful story. The prose was poetic yet concise. There were a few small grammatical errors and two typos throughout, but that wasn't a big deal. At first I worried it would be too OC heavy, but Lynnie wasn't overbearing in the stories of the main characters. It was very well written and I liked how well everything tied together. I really commend you on the plot. Really well done.

DO A SEQUEL PLEASE. AND DONT STOP WITH THIS ITS SO FUNNY I'm sorry it is too funny to read this :) :) :) :) :)