story sucks ass

We have Barbara, Thimoty Drake and a Jason. All is left is Dick Grayson, Cassandra Cain and Damien Wayne.

There's a good story here, and the author is very talented. It's a shame that all the good that's here is buried under mounds of far-left SJW ignorance and idiocy, bigotry - be it against men, women who don't share the author's biases, persons of means, persons of faith [be they Christian or Muslim], and western civilization generally - and these United States specifically.

look, I really don't know if you got a problem with Islam or Pakistan, but whatever it is, we should talk it out. this is the second time in this story you have talked about the Muslims and their religion (both times in a negative way) and it is getting quite annoying. if you did not mean any offence, then the least you could have done would be to write in an author's notice that you did not mean any offence.
otherwise, if you actually got a problem with the Muslims, then deal with me talk to me and explain yourself, because I am one, and proud to be one.

Hahahah i love your Alfred!

Hahahaha " and use a damned throat lozenge"

heh

ooo great first chapter

Can't believe I missed this during my earlier browsing. Absolutely love it. It's a shame there are so few Bruce/OC stories out there, I'm always confused when it generally lists romance with the Joker and Bane. Anabeth is an awesome character, very realistic and different to other ocs. Admired the work she, Safe Haven and her friends were doing. I was right about Donna but didn't expect her being Anabeth's mother. Glad Seth and the other b******* got what they deserved, especially Seth for murdering her unborn child. Thought that Alfred was way out of character when he suggested a 'medical remedy', some of the phrases he used were also surprising. That social worker was a b****, glad she also got what she deserved and that Anabeth got custody of Timothy. Understood but was so devastated with the ending, I know superheroes don't get the girl but they should've been together. Thank you so so much for sharing this story. Your writing and creativity are addictive. Hope you return to fanfiction one day. Best wishes.

That last line cracked me up. I don't think any other character has told batman to get throat lozenges before lol. He needs to stop breaking into homes.

Great story. Completely missed it while browsing. So far I'm suspecting Donna (sometimes it's the bosses) the only other people think it could be are Maya or the security guard. I was never good at cluedo lol. Intrigued.

I'm so sad I've finished this it was so good.

I read this whole story over a weekend in February and since then I've reread it about twice. It's nice to read a story that focuses on people who can make in impact without ever being recognized for all their work. It was also nice to read a story with so many strong female characters who support each other. This was a wonderful story and you are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading your future work!

OMG TIMMY IS TIM DRAKE! I CAN DIE IN PEACE NOW T-T my fave robin

Awww, fuck.

What I hate the most about this point in the story is that it's the set up to tragedy. It's like the night before the Greeks entered Troy all over again or the minute before Titanic hit the iceberg and tanked; every piece is set in place, ready to fall like dominos-but I really, really don't want them to fall.

I want Annabeth to have a happy life and a wonderful marriage and a beautiful child. Is that really so much to ask for?