Reviews for Unwanted Desire
Guest chapter 2 . 11/22/2019
i wonder if a child wrote this
aphrogisa chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
ch 3
KatUchiha743 chapter 13 . 7/5/2017
WOW!
fiona chapter 13 . 8/8/2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!
OMG! you MUST UPDATE!
Story plot is amazing and so is the character progression!
0 Green-Eyed Goon 0 chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Yikes! Talk about jerking at the heart strings. Not gonna lie, I felt a little teary there for a second, reminding me about the whole Itachi is dead thing really got me going there. And I haven't even seen that episode yet! DX
Anyways, awesome story so far! I just love how accurately you made both Naruto and Sakura, but most of, Sasuke! But man, I really hope Naruto's not dead! ToT
I mean, being stabbed in the chest by an electrified Kusinagi does sound like a death impossible to avoid, but he has survived worse. I can't wait to read what happens next! Again, well done! XD
Guest chapter 9 . 6/20/2015
Hm? Why are there two Chapter 7s that are the exact same? Is there an actual Chapter 8? Either ways it still seems to transition smoothly from 7 to 9 except for the abrupt amount of love Sasuke gives in 9. Also, I hope the power obsession is further elaborated. (I apologize if you did. I did not quite finish reading this story yet.) Otherwise, besides the confusion of the missing Chapter 8, this story is probably one of the best multichapter sasusaku stories I've ever read. Not to mention the lemons are well written too.
ANIMEGIRLFREAKYURI chapter 10 . 10/31/2014
Inner sakura or sakura girl you got wrapped around your finger remind of girlfriend
Guest chapter 13 . 10/15/2014
I LOVE YOUR STORY! MAKE IT A TRILOGY!
NuraHikari chapter 4 . 5/20/2014
well this story is really good so far. :)
crazymel2008 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
good fic.
White Acer chapter 13 . 5/8/2013
finally he said it! Thanks I really liked the story!
Beeper-Cowboy-Bop chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
whoaaaaa awesome
Guest chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
really good story!
i love it so much!
can't get over it!
MidoriDark34 chapter 11 . 10/3/2012
Woow :) love it so much.. I really enjoyed reading this story. It was really a pleasure. Just one thing I have to say.. I think hakama are pants..
ANYWAY D
Just loved it with all of my heart, soul, and other vital organs :P
nicecillemus chapter 9 . 5/28/2012
what happened to chapter 8?
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