Hello! Great story! I'm enjoying it so far!

I admit, I'm a bit of a grammar police...your grammar is perfectly fine...it's just that. Bleu is spelt...blue. And bee is just be. Just pointing those out for ya, in case no one else did. They don't really bother me, it's just that it may be awckuid to misspell them infrount of your friends or something.

I agree that the spelling has been a little irritating but the story itself more than makes up for that.

' when thinking
" when speaking

TT_TT WTH?! nooooo -chap 26

aww r.i.p Fuido & Juuki-san I love the bit with the flames lol "Flames of youth!"

great choice of song for the last chapter one of my favs sillly boys getting drunk

I'm sorry. I did try to read this, but there are too many grammatical mistakes. A few mispelled words are easy to ignore but when it happens in each paragraph the flow of the story becomes stilted. Even with the story unfinished, I think it would be best to get a Beta Reader.

Thanks for sharing,
E. Black

You put assaulted istead of insulted. :)

Hay-lin sounds more Chinese than Japanese. . . but I'm not Japanese so. . .

I think that was adorable! I reeeaaally hope you update soon.

Naked rapist from hell!

Jashin was fucking hilarious!

Holy Waffles! So much crying!

No matter how many times I read this chapter I always get teared up. TT-TT Just too beautiful!

The fucking duck-butt!