That was beautiful and very intriguing. It made me wonder if the Lord and Lucifer really had a conversation before he turned his back on God. I like how you wrote in the 1st POV. Doing that gave the story so much power. You also had God "in character" if that makes sense. I believe in God, so I don't mean my last comment to sound like God is fictional. I mean that you have painted an accurate picture of Him, if that makes sense. Very interesting and very good work!

Speechless.

Usually i have a problem with people writing bible fanfics but this was written very well. great job.

Well, I'm not exactly sure what to say. The story was good, and well written. Its just not your usual kind of story.

But, I'm going to say, 'Well done, and keep up the good work!'

Dessi

Another great oneshot! You are quite the expert on writing these Bible oneshots. Kudos to you.