Gorgeous and heart-wrenching. Well done!

This is really beautiful.

You really captured Luke and Leia's emotions perfectly. I loved this. I am completely stalking, and greedily eating up your fic. I hope it's not too creepy (although I do hope you are getting these messages-because your stories are great, and you should know it!). Anyway, I'm staying up past my bedtime, but I don't care. I'm off to read more.

So sad and touching. Lovely.

Awwww, a bittersweet piece! I really enjoyed it!

This was very insightful into the feelings. It seemed at times that you implied they loved each other, but not as siblings. I did enjoy the eloquence of the language (especially in the parentheses) as you describe their feelings. I like how you explained the story without using quotation marks. Very well done.

-WL

A great story. Very good.

This was wonderful. bittersweet, as so much of your writing is.

A single moment captured in time. Loved it.

That was really good. A little confusing, but really good. I like it a lot. Great job with that.

Very powerful. I love the use of pronouns and the tone of the piece. It's very powerful and leaves the reader with a...sense of emptiness. This is one of my favorites!

You wrote Luke and Leia's emotions perfectly. Great Story!

It's sad how Luke has to "grow up" so fast. It's like he just had whatever innocence left just ripped out of him.

Leia knew Han had to go, and that it would hurt, but the way it happened is truely tragic. It's good that she has her (unknown) brother there to support her.

And they know they'll get Han back, because there is always a happy ending for heroes.

beautiful, sad story. good job!