it looks like yozak was eloping with yuuri very openly with the permission of conrad hahahah but nice.. but i wished that you would end the story by sending three people yuuri conrad n yozak vacation on fishing instead of two.. but nice story .. and conrad trusted yozak more than himslef.. that is true friendship.. and u r the first person who showed yuuri has feelings .. and he should have his the full rights to choose a person whether its a boy or a girl.. he is a maou for god sake.. i cried at the parts when revealed the bruises on yuuri body .. its really very sad to read that part .. very nice story and ended with merging of yuui n maou soul thats cool .. :)

wow
rage everywhere

it's just like... when your emotion already open, then it will ... boom!

I love this

wow new things, violent Wolfram

Really loved this story.

thats deep Gwendal, real deep.

oh my poor Yuuri. Aurther-san, your doing great!

I really like your fanfic.

First sentence was marvellous!

Wow...

Very nice! I love the drama!

I've only read the first chapter so far, but I can tell this is going to be very sad. Like the characteristics of a tragedy, you did a good job with all the foreshadowing which just intensifies the suspense and feelings.

This chapter was so beautiful and so sad that I couldn't contain myself and read it out loud. It was the only way I could keep from crying! Your writing technique is one of the best I've come across and you have the extraordinary ability to really pull at a person's heartstrings. The relationships are so beautifully woven together and you seem to have such a deep understanding of the kkm characters. A truly masterful piece. Thank you.

My brain has unfortunate affliction of loving the pairing that is least likely to happen- part of the reason why i turn to fanfiction.

I loved the premise of this story. I loved the thought you put into it. But i especially love the yozakyuuri you put into it. I was hoping in vain that somehow, it'd become a conradyuuriyozak threesome. But it didnt happen. :( i believe that the yozakyuuri aspect of the story was explored more than the conyuu. Yozak's voice was spot on, that i actually cried at the end. I loved yozak. You gave him a voice that we don't really hear in canon. While it was yuuri's story, somehow it was also yozak's story. How he deals with his love in the face of someone else holding his love's heart.
What im saying is, i love you. Please write yozakyuuri. Please. Thank uou!
You are an amazing writer.