Listen idk if your even on this anymore but i wanted to say you made a wonderful fan fic that not only bring in the sexyness but also actually tells a story in beautiful detales. Ive had your story saved in my phone since i was a teen discovering my sexuality and now 6 years later i can say i still read this story time to time and smile cause honestly you should right books. This took time and dedication and i wanted you to know its appreciated. Stay safe out there :)

I’ve read this story multiple times. I HATE that Alice is instantly forgiven. Honestly Edward is too. Like no, there should be some groveling.

This was good. Very much enjoyed it.

Seriously, did Bella seriously just go crawl back to Edward?

Argh, you kept this drama queen Edward part. Why?

But vampires dont bleed?

I quite love how complicated this is compared to the usual fanfiction mechanism of make the person in the way evil and/or dead.

Wow, Edward isn't even any new level of patronising, it's like this'll be a perfectly fair depiction of all the characters, no bashing. Also sorta looking like it'll end up poly? Pleasantly surprising...

Hahaha, I loved this. Bella thinking he's pissed about Alice promising to turn her and then the entire talk with the family. Jasper's a hero, love him, total gem, glad Carlisle talked to him. The general friction between Alice and Edward was great too, especially with his passive telepathy. Then Rosalie just being left alone and pissy, love her too!

Nice to see a more chill and likeable Jacob who can own up to and admit wrongdoing and a self aware Alice who recognises how silly this whole error in communication drama is.

What an amazing mix of adorable, heart warming and hot.

Huh, so Alice is doing it first. Is it better that she at least isn't dragging everyone with her? Also interesting to see Edward so casual about all this.

So she loves both and this is looking too good for Edward to make a random dick move that'd get him out the running. Guess you can just stick to the completely canon dick move of ditching her and removing all mementos of their time together :P

Wonder how the kiss and the thoughts he must be reading will affect things.

Ah, more adorable. Love it. Guess Alice's thirst is of a distinctly less scary variety than Edward's too, which is good news.

I found out about this fanfic through a viral Twitter post. After 10 years of it being finished I knew at one point it was going to end and I wasn't going to ever have to feel the excitement and frustration of waiting for an update. But nevertheless I wish there was just a little more because I absolutely adored this story. As much as I love Edward and Bella. I seem to find myself loving Alice and Bella more. This was beautifully written and captured all of the characters with such accuracy it amazed me. This is exceptional writing and thank you for bringing me back to the adventures that Isabella Swan, Forks, Washington, and the Cullens gave me when I was a teenager.