Nicely done.

That was nice!

Really good. Please write more.

Yay for applesauce! Omg that was so funny. I hardly knew it was possible to jam pack so much into one chapter. These two felt more like 10 chapters mushed into two. However, they were wonderful. I especially loved this one. The lemon was nicely detailed with more kink and less romance than I would have expected. Not that I'm complaining. ~_ And seeing Sephy envious and hurting is so sad and sweet! All in all the story dealt with some pretty emotional themes, but the ridiculousness of their misadventures and the humor of it all kept it light-hearted. I loved it. Bravo!

Searching for a good Zack Seph fic was well worth it when I found this. It is so funny and sweet - and best of all it is well-written and has a plausible plot! I absolutely love how Zack orchestrated the news clips to make the general angry - all to see if he had feelings for him. By the way, "You're lieutenant, sir?" is supposed to be written "*Your* lieutenant..." There were only about three minor typos in this fic, but this phrase is so important to the story that I thought I should let you know so you could fix it.

I love this story! Added it to my favs as soon as I read it. I was like "Oh no! Poor Sephy!" and "Zack, just go and make up (and out) with Seph already!" the whole time :). But everything's alright in the end. And what an end it was! :D

I really liked it, it made me grin like a madman.

Well done!

Furthermore I really wanted to thank you for reviewing my stories "Sweet Darkness" and "Sweet Truth". I'm happy you liked them! -

Hikari

yummeh

awwww, this is so cute. :3

the ending was great

i was lucky enough to have this fic as my first sephy/Zack xD

it was simply perfect! I loved it!

i loved gota wright one with more sex a lot more YAOI moments like makeout sceans,wet dreams, you do ill love you forever.X3

This was just... perfect really nicely written . love it A

Wow! Yea it's long but worth every word. Excellent characterization of both Sephiroth and Zack-some people tend to write the gay couples too girly. You should definitely write this from Zack's POV or write another Seph/Zack...hell just write more ;)!

...for the whole time i was reading this i was like "WHAT WAS IN THE LETTER?" XD it kept bugging me! i almost could not read it all, it was too much couristy! XD

i will find out where you live, and force you to read flame after flame of this couple if you do not satate my need for a zack pov!

(XD) How hilarious is that about one-fourth of my way through reading this chapter, I realized that "One Week" by Barenaked Ladies was playing on my iTunes! {roflao} I'm sorry, but that song is just PERFECT for this chapter! ...I was gonna put the lyrics, but that would take up too much space and make this review look like at total "WTF? Why'd that person put LYRICS in their review!"/retarded review. {sweatdrop} Instead, just go here: http: (SLASH)(SLASH) artists . letssingit . com (SLASH)barenaked - ladies - lyrics - one - week - tsg2mqh

Just take out the spaces and where it says "(SLASH)" all you gotta do is put press the key on the keyboard has the "?" on it. Anyways, just look at the lyrics and you'll see why, after I realized it was playing, I cracked up. {goes back to reading the chapter}

{FINALLY finishes reading about 1 damn hour later} Okay... this has to be the LONGEST yaoi I have ever read! Then again, it COULD be because you took FOREVER to GET to said yaoi! {glares at you VERY unhappily} And I think you kept Sephy and Zack in character pretty well! {smiles} Then again, I haven't played Crisis Core yet! (XD) THEY NEED TO MAKE IT FOR THE PS2 BEFORE I CAN PLAY IT! (DX){cries} Oh well... my boyfriend says he has a PSP at his grandpa's house PLUS Crisis Core, but I'm STILL working on talking him into swiping both from his grandpa's house and letting me borrow them! (XD)/(DX) Okay, off topic there! I'm gonna go before I say anything ELSE that's stupid and/or random. ...UKEROTH! (XD) {runs out of the room}

Sephiroth: GAIADAMMIT, WOMAN! YOU SWORE NEVER TO SAY THAT AGAIN AFTER THE LAST TIME I CHASED YOU! {chases after Kit}

Zack: Hmm... "Ukeroth"... I need to try that! {walks off after Sephiroth and Kit with a thinking face upon his countenance}