| Reviews for Twisted Wonderland: An Invader Zim Tale |
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   octolingkiera chapter 6 . 10/10/2008 What was that? [the song] Anywayz, this is really funny! Good work! |
| tokyomewmewfan or jessicaXD chapter 9 . 10/6/2008 DUDE!That was awsome!I luf it~!I thought there was gonna be zadrTT well atleast that last part where both sing together lol. |
| JESSICA HOPKINS chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Yay i told u i would comment somedayXD!Iluf it so far!...is this the first chapter?O.o...ohwell3 |
| Spectra chapter 7 . 9/4/2008 Awright! Keep going! I can't figure out what those squiddy things are, but I do recognize the lamp post thingy from 'Spirited Away.' Anyhoo, I'm still enjoying this, so keep it comin'! |
| anonymous chapter 6 . 8/23/2008 your stories are seriously twisted...but in a funny good way 8D your writing is so descriptive and vivid...made me feel as if i was part of the story and certainly enjoyed the confusion 8D i can't wait for the next chapter...keep it up and keep on writing! |
| Spectra chapter 6 . 8/21/2008 Oh yeah! I forgot to mention last time I like how the story is in first-person perspective, especially when it's Dib's POV. After reading I found myself doing sketches of Kameo- guess your fic kinda got into my head |
| Spectra chapter 5 . 8/19/2008 Hey! Pretty cool story so far _~ I like how crazy it is. Keep it up! And I'll keep reading. The only thing I could critique- and it has nothing to do with the story itself- is you might want to put spaces between when different characters talk, and when I say spaces, I mean put them on separate lines. It is a little confusing when it's all bunched together, but I'm only saying this as constructive criticism, not to dump on you. I really DO like this fic, and as far as the content goes it's great. Anything Invader Zim/Alice in Wonderland crossover is cool by me. Again, Nice work |
| GirPiggy chapter 5 . 8/19/2008 MOVE IT! YAY! I wanna see if Dib gets seriously hurt! yay I hope he does! jk, can't wait for your next chappie! Your #1 Fan, ~GirPiggy |
| anonnymous D chapter 4 . 8/18/2008 can't wait for the next chapter! |
| justinetin7wushuwakoko7ILY7 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008 hello! gling mong mag english!(ur so gud in speaking in english) hha! bkit may translation? wierd! hha! nvm! musta ka? comment me on FS! ty! lotsalab! taykare! mwuah! tinisjustine |
| GirPiggy chapter 4 . 8/16/2008 Can't wait for the next chapter! ~GirPiggy |
| Rei is to lazy to log in chapter 4 . 8/16/2008 QoH will look for joo and beats you up Kame my friend. 8D OMG. MAD MARCH HARE. OMG COMPLETE CRACK. HERE WE COME XD |
| Ankaara666 chapter 3 . 8/13/2008 -Is ROFLing- This chapter is WIN! Along with the WINful things in it! -Caramelldansen! -Pocky! -Peanut Butter Jelly Time! YAY! 8D |
| GirPiggy chapter 2 . 8/11/2008 You should add another Irken. That would be kinda creepy. You can use my irken, her name is cten, curly antennae, purple eyes, anything else you need to know? make it up! w Plz use her! |
| LetMyLoveReachYourHeart chapter 1 . 8/10/2008 this is my account turtle [kame] I ish waiting for teh mad hatter ;D ;D |
