I just wished they coukd have used erasa more like u did in ur story they could have shown her in db super where she videl and gohan are still friends

Yay Pan, who managed to be both canon and non-canon, yeah she's weird

Kidnappings!?

Videl has a habit of showing up at the wrong time

J'aime.

Aww such a cute ending. _ I wasn't sure where you were going with the kidnapping but I like it. The whole naming their kids thing is just adorable.

I nice conclusion to this three-shot. I definitely enjoyed it and had few qualms with it. Villainizing Sharpner and making him into scum is my biggest seeing as I'm actually rather fond of the big lug.

Gohan's characterization was rather spot on, and Erasa ending it thinking of Son Pan was something I initially disliked but now think is the perfect ending..

Great job MVS

I'm definitely looking forward to the final chapter of this story! Wow!

Erasa is amazing, and adorable. I can't imagine how the situation with her being kidnapped will be resolved..

Videl being so skeptical of the version of that story where Gohan likes her is disappointing.

As a huge GhVi fan I would've loved for that to turn out differently.

Good chapter.

This was a pretty good start to this three-shot..

Personally I think Videl is ever so slightly OOC. I think she would thank Gohan for the effort, THEN yell at him for interfering! XD

Erasa knowing Gohan's secret presents problems for our favorite half-Saiyan in many ways. How can Gohan deal with Videl's inquisition now at this crucial moment?

If Erasa saw him, could others have seen him landing there?

Was Gohan really affected so much by her behavior to unconsciously drift to that same spot from before and to not even detect her LI approaching?

Good introductory chapter!

:( no Gohan videl development? :(

What the hell happened!

You...did you release it like this on purpose? Uploaded on 8-6-8 and finished on 12-16-12? Planned or not... stop it. You're freaken me out!

Now that it's over, I figured I'd review. Really good story. Always in character, no wordy parts for readers to get stuck on, everything just feels natural. Congrats on finishing it!

Nice story and great job on the last chapter!

Great story! Loved the Erasa blackmail concept you did. I haven't read anything like it and it was written really well. Like how you ended it too, though it would of been nice to see some more GohanVidel in the last chapter, but then again, it was really sweet how you ended it.

Good three-shot. It's very enjoyable. Do you think you can make a little sequel? Not a long one, maybe a chapter or two. And it can maybe take place in the future(not too far in the future), or something. If you don't though, that'll be fine. The story is great the way it is.
Good job!