please continue

I fell in love with your story, it's amazing work

Amazing fanfic! I think it would be nice to see vegeta ending up with either goku or gohan. Though I cant deny that goku and vegetal together just rubs me a good way haha. Love this story, hope someday you find it in your time to continue with it!

Vegeta/Gohan is really an intriguing pairing, and Gohan as seme is novel and believable here. The story is well paced, though as it all led up to the last swelling act, I really felt that the act itself of Gohan and Vegeta actually getting together was missing; not for the sake of smut or an obliged happy ending, but as a sort of healing experience for Vegeta in the storyline. I really think you should continue the story, or even just add a final chapter so that the act can take place and give way to plot resolution. That would give the reader a sense of satisfaction and the story a sense of punctuation, as it definitely deserves it. :)

*bookmarking this b/c I want to read it when I get some time. usually vegeta tops the demis, so this has to be good. will review.*

this story is awesome! keep writing!

Update soon please! Remember your "! Good job! Yoshi!

I really hope that you will finish this. It deserves to be completed, it is such a great story. That was a hell of a line to end with (in a good way) I have good feeling for this.

I could see where Goku would have problems taking care of Vegeta. TO have to help feed somebody you've been in battle with and never seen any side other than fierce, has got to be a mind twisting experience.

Damn! Bravo Red Bravo! I know readers like long reviews but I'm just awe struck right now. Have you thought about writing something original and being published?

I really enjoyed reading that. I'm in love with the deep character development you have brought to the table with this fic, this chapter in particular. great job :)

This is definitely one of the most unique take on Vegeta that I have read in a long time. It is well written and I'm throughly enjoying.

I really like this story, have read it a couple of times over the years. It’s reminiscent of your story Aishiteru Gaka no Ouji, but this one seems to capture me more. I believe after reading both it’s probably your writing improvement and experience since 2004 that makes it much better. The “Hobby of Choice” is a very unique one we can all relate to, reading as a distraction to everyday life. Your inner dialoging of the characters is great, and the angst is very engaging. I’ve rarely if ever found a Gohan/Vegeta fic I had any interest in, but this one has me totally hooked and wanting to see the relationship progress, and find out where it ends up. Most Gohan/Vegeta stories that are lengthy never actually make it to the part were waiting for now that I think of it, hopefully someday you will continue and we’ll get to see a resolution to this story. Real life is always priority number one, but it never hurts to fall to distraction sometimes.:) Wish you the best in life, and never loose that love of writing.

Sincerely,

Azmidiske

Oh please continue your story. I have read through the story twice now. I love how you built up gohan's attraction to Vegeta and how you had bulma and vegeta divorced. I would like to see where else you are taking this story.

update soon

I love this story so much you have to keep writing it. It's really good please update!