| Reviews for Fatal Mistake |
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   TekoloKuautli chapter 3 . 6/22 My god, he just corrupted the moral compass protagonist. When I saw what disaster you did by destroying the timeline I didn't imagine it would extend to even the personality traits of the characters. Of course Kagome is too much of a bleeding heart to just steal of everyone without remorse but still. At this point she's gonna be a baddass thief and a miko every demon will fear for their life. And well, if in one day he already protects and cares for her enough to see to her well being in a week his own body will betray him by being unable to stay away when he tries to leave her at a human village. Which I imagine being a disaster because of her foreign attitude and fearless attitude towards demons. Ah, so sad this awesome story is on hiatus. |
| TekoloKuautli chapter 2 . 6/22 The irony, Kuronue the thief confused as an angel by a little girl. I hope they get along better. History has been completely rewritten in Makai alright. |
| TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 6/22 Oh, this plot is so delicious. Already history was changed because Kagome's grandfather was her only family. But now, wow. And I can't believe I'm saying this, but team Urameshi is actually good at their job despite being only a group of misfits and former criminals. If this is the kind of messed up normal teams get into. |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 3 . 5/8/2018 This. Is. AWESOME! ! ! ! Please update! Please, PLEASE, PLEEEEEASE! ! ! ! |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 2 . 5/8/2018 Yay! LOVING this! |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 1 . 5/8/2018 I read them, I READ THEM! And so far, this story is AWESOME! |
| Late Night Dreamer chapter 3 . 4/26/2017 Aww this is so cute hope you update! |
| o0-SilverMoon-0o chapter 3 . 10/12/2016 Oh My! I love it! It's sooo good! Please! You have to update soon! |
| kimmico chapter 2 . 7/25/2015 Really funny. |
| kimmico chapter 1 . 7/25/2015 Lol. The funny thing is. He is kami. They reallt are doomed. And you suck for not continuing such an awesome story. Write in you damn book at home if you're not sure you will finish it. Don't just go hey? I have an awesome story that I just thought of on a whim. I may be too busy or not to continue it, so I'm going to abandon it later k? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2015 Please update! |
| kimmico chapter 3 . 2/15/2015 You are undoubtedly one of my favorite authors, I love your writings, but the fact that such beautiful and funny work undone leaves me disappointed. So I cant follow you or put you as a favorite, because I see a lot of stories, and it looks like you have no intention of finishing or continuing. Love your work though |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2014 Update soon it was really funny |
| FabulousSleepyHead chapter 3 . 8/17/2014 Awww. I'm oddly touch by what Kuronue just did. I love this story! Update soon! |
| FabulousSleepyHead chapter 1 . 8/17/2014 Oh my god! I get it but so dramatic! In my opinion at least |
