Wow. Just wow. Excuse me well I try to get over my shock from reading such a mind blowing story. Okay shock over, that was amazing! I love the plot and the lullabies and Marina's name and the iddy biddy details. I just love it. It's an amazing story so far and I love how you made Sebastian a human (I espeially love his hair color, red heads are beutiful.) I can't wait for more, and is that a romance I see in there? ;)

cool and man that must be a lot for her to handle becoming a quen at such a young age but cool

It's good. A little confusing, but good

Nice! I like it a lot! I wasn't sure how I'd react to a Little Mermaid fanfiction story but I'm eager to keep reading, and I haven't felt like that about a lot of stories lately. Keep it up

very very good. can't wait for more.

Hey I like this story a lot marnia has a lot for powers and just need to find them cool well i can't wait to find out if they can get her to help them cool

so i have a question do their feet turn int o tails when they touch the water? thats wat im guessing i lovoeed the story its so creative wen i was younger i always wondered if the stars were faeries lol it seems a little silly

Very nice chapter, I didn't realize Marina had the ability to turn into a mermaid like Melody and Ariel. Can't wait for the next chapter, Hope you update soon!

wow i feel so sorry for her i love this story and i can't wait to read more.

Update soon, please.

Quite the interesting piece. I hope you update soon!

wow I am so glad that I found this story. It is so moving that I can't keep my eyes off of it. It is very well written and you are a very good writer. I would say one of the best here on fanifiction. Hope you update another chapter soon becasue I can't wait to find out what happens.

Dude! Keep going!

wow i love i thanx for updating i hope you update soon

p.s. with the work you do you should write your own book.

i like it but please keep updating