yes! a chapter! but oh no! it didn’t even begin the training part! this is a good chapter. looking forward to the future chapters. Thank you for your time writing this story. my sister goes to college too and she’s busy all the time so do take your time.

Oh wow, interesting! The forest is a good idea to start things off for the training. I like reading about new characters so I’ll be looking forward getting to know them by reading more. I happen to notice one mistake, but I was reading fast so there could be more too…

Anyway, it is this sentence:

“I even agreed to let you train them as you see fit. But this…. Kai. You have to see that this is going to far.”

It should be:

“I even agreed to let you train them as you see fit. But this…. Kai. You have to see that this is going [too] far.” I hope I’m right about that. hahaha...

Update again when you have the time. :)

When the e-mail turned up in my inbox to say this was updated I was like "I don't remember this fanfic." But then when I read the recap it all came flooding back xD

Great chapter. Brilliant descriptions!

Please update soon!

I like your story! I think it's cool that they are each training their own teams. The forest sounds scary...I can't wait for the next chapter! update soon )

O... nice. i wonder how this is going to get to. can't wait to read the next chapter about kai and the team.

Alright, I'm starting to really like this! It's interesting that they all have different kids with different personalities. Te he!

Take your time on chapter 3 then, I'm really excited on how you will work on Kai meeting his team.

I have only read the first chapter so far... I have to get off my laptop for a while because something came up. So here I am to leave a quick review.

Man, it's like I have forgotten how cold Kai was. He wasn't really that cold in here but it reminded me his character. For some reason, I really like Tyson and Kai getting into arguments! It's just funny and you did a great job on that! I hope to see more, but hopefully they will get along some time too. Yep.

looks like the only one that got lucky with his team was Ray. What about Kai? where's he taking his team? Who are in his team? Oh, so many questions, so little answers. I like the idea of the fic, keep it up!

hey wht about kai? how;s he doing with his kids? anyways good chapter.

This is such an awesome fanfic!

I can't wait to read more!

Please update soon xD

Kai with kids? Now this should be funny! I like the idea and the first chapter is nicely written! Keep it up!

Update soon, ne?

KO xoxo

Hey, great stuff! Really looking forward to reading more of this story. Update soon! :)

not bad at all... i can really see myself reading alot more of this in the, hopefully, very near future. its been a while since i've read a fict like this and from the way you've started i'm positive that this is gonna be good!

update soon

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sasuke chica

Gah! I LOVE this idea! I really can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

BTW, Tyson wins too much, (World Champion, etc.) so I do hope Kai's team wins! But whatever, your the author!

Nice to see some people still remember Beyblade..

Well im liking it..(hmm can i imagine Kai with kids)

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