I remember reading this years ago
Hates Gin and Kurumu years ago and still do now
fk them in this fanfic

This always has and will always be my favorite fanfiction. I read it a long time ago an always find myself rereading it. This is an epic story, truly amazing; i can only hope to make a golden piece such as this story. I finally get to thank you for this godly work of art. Thank you for all your hard work

Does Hi no Kuni no Daimyō write these in his free time ? Konoha will get weak and easy to conquer like this. I hereby declare the Daiyoji Ninkai Taisen.

Sad in a way the cycle the hate and prejudice will continue and bad things are likely to happen. Knowing they may die they send away the young generation in hope the young find a happier life and the sins of the previous generation don’t follow, whatever happens next naruto might have to learn to be better I feel like his sin or mistake will impact his family later on if there is a sequel

Boring

Great story but...you know I dont think I will ever be even be able to stand in the same place with a girl who helped in the rápe of my gf without trying to kill her . And I don't think I will even talk with my gf , ignoring me for over 2 weeks for another guy and fûcking in the end , the relationship would have ended already. Really that's the only problem I have. Basically trust issue person faces trust issue but trusts people easily not something that would happen. Creativity is everywhere but that's the only issue really,thanks

I have no words besides i loved this story through and through it was everything i could've hoped to read the drama was amazingly placed the action was well written and the characters stayed true but what i think was the best was that you can see it burning with creativity and hrd work from the very beginning to the end simply amazing.

So he’s pussy? Lame.

I love this story, definitely in my top 3:)

Shit.. BAD FUCK

An honest end to a good story

Hi.
So it seems Lord Akashiya did have some other reason for not wanting Moka to be with Naruto after all... I guess it didn't help that i recently watched (rewatched) Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid, but i still think he's a dodo head.

Also, why didn't Moka's mother try to contact Naruto, instead of waiting 3 days for him to maybe show up at school? Seems a bit risky if you ask me.

Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.

Hi.
I'm enjoying rereading this story, coming back to it after several years of reading other stuff on this site :) I have read several of your other stories, so know that your writing has improved over the years.

However, I'm having some problems understanding the motivations of Lord Akashiya here... He wants Moka to be the wife of another 'powerful' vampire, because that will make their children together more 'powerful'. However, it has earlier been stated that a Vampire's power is derived from how old they are (I imagine some 'vampire lines', like bloodlines would be above/below the average), and not by how much they train. I imagine many problems could have been avoided if Moka simply admitted that Naruto is more powerful than herself, and still has much room for growing stronger. The fact Naruto is also going to become a vampire (which means he will only continue growing stronger in time) should have been taken into account. I seem to vaguely remember that Moka's father was a plot point in the original as well, so i'm a bit sad you would use it despite deviating so much from canon.

Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.

... so its gonna be this kind of naruto... oh well at least everyone can protect him I suppose.

If he ever uses kurama he might stand a chance. Or jutsu at the very least. Just using a couple kunai was kinda stupid... but jis funeral. Please dont be as pathetic as the cannon mc from rosario... and now to read on.