I loved this! I love the plot, how well you captured the characters and how real your oc seems. I wish you'd update. I'd like to see how it ends. Is there a comming of age moment when lucy repents the things she's done? Does she just spiral out of control. Is there a happy ending? I guess I'll have to decide for myself. Sigh. Well, I'm still glad I came across this anyway :)

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Chapter Ten! This is getting to be the length of epicness now! Wow, that made no sense.

Anyways... she's getting badd now. Yeah, way to state the obvious, Al. lol. But in all seriousness, I think you've showed an excellent transition from the seemingly innocent girl to what she is now. That takes talent. It'd be totally WTF if this all happened over night, but it didn't. Soo excellent work.

I'm kinda interested to see the repercussions of her behavior and new attitude. I can imagine Darry probably wanted to smack her when she was acting like what he said meant nothing to her.

I'm also interested to see how Pony is gonna react to all this. He's covered for her before... will he cover for her again? How long will it be before he's had enough and refuses to help her out period?

(Forgive me, I'm making no sense lol)

BUT overall, I really did enjoy this chapter, and as always, I'm excited to see where you take the next chapter. I want an update! Like now! Get on on itt.

~Allison

Great update.

So interesting to see Lucy's change.

Update again.

I bet Steve enjoyed her getting in trouble. Update soon please! )

You go Lucy! Haha! Glad she finally got back at Steve. Maybe now, he will be atleast a little nicer ).

This story just keeps getting better )!

Well, I guess I was wrong about Darry hunting her down haha. Ponyboy's awesome for helping her sneak out and get back in! Haha!

I would have freaked when Tim showed up haha! I love this story!

She really is asking for trouble. I wouldn't be surprised if Darry was already out hunting her down! Haha!

I bet it was fun for her sneaking out like that. Can't wait to see what happens. I love this story!

I have a feeling she's going to get into some trouble. I guess I'll just have to read and find out ).

Aww, Steve's comment really got to her. I'm glad she found a pair of her mom's shoes to wear. I hope she gains some confidence! )

I love this story so far ). Steve can be so mean sometimes.

great chapter loved it can't wait for the next one update soon.