Well... That's nice. Please write more and actually finish the story.
Slender Man
Cthulu
The Cheshire Cat

love it :) update soon !

omg plz continue i cant wait to read more .this is like the best fan fic ever plz dont stop. update soon and plz dont put in any lemons or anything bad like dirty edward od bad language because the story is going great as it is. plz conitnue

oh no! black should so die! just an idea! really love the story cant wait for the update!:)

Once again... i LOVED it ! lol

Update as soon as ! your like the only person who updates often, i have loads of storys that havnt updated in like months!...how dare they haha!

Helen x

OMG OMG OMG OMG! *hyperventilating!*

you NEED to write more lol i love it!

x

o0o0o a little cliff hanger there good story

update soon

You have turned a classic story into a masterpiece. This is very good and i can't wai to read more. I will stay with this story untill the end, i have a god feeling this will be the best story i've read

Have a nice day!

Btw... sorry if the 'ill be waiting' sounded really pervy... i didnt mean it like that haha...

...but i wil b waiting for u 2 post more!

x

PLEASE.

WRITE.

MORE.

haha! i LOVE it! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE lol...

can you please read my Fanfic...

its called ... 'Faxness And The Voices'

thanks !

Helen XD

p.s... WRITE MORE! lol ill be waiting xx

good story so far!

MORE!

I absolutely love it :D

But its a modern cinderella right?

Its so amazing!

Update as soon as possible!

Its really good

Hey! I love it. You might want to work a bit on spelling and grammar, though. But I love the plot, and the bit at the end where she's like, "And I am disgusted." I totally- literally- lol'd!

write more write more!

i cant wait for the ending lol... but try and make it quite long lol so i have more to read :D

xx