Reviews for Alternate Ending
Murtagh101 chapter 30 . 8/3/2016
I think an a cause it's goes a bit fast from James hating lily to him loving her
Guest chapter 31 . 7/4/2015
Why do you always assume we are all girls and like twilight
Guest chapter 23 . 7/3/2015
I'm definitely enjoying my snow day, in July, it's definitely snowing
Guest chapter 22 . 7/3/2015
Was Madame bibliothek meant to be funny? You didn't even spell it right
Its bibliotechque
Guest chapter 20 . 7/3/2015
Stop it with the twilight, it sücks, no one can put up a good argument for why its good eg: its set in America
Wtf
How is that a reason
Guest chapter 18 . 7/3/2015
Thats an unhealthy obsession, it might also be where you are getting your mistakes from eg:Pasted is not a word, well it is, but not in he context that you were using it in, the word you were looking for is passed
Guest chapter 8 . 7/3/2015
Did you just imply that I was a girl
pottermommy1118 chapter 41 . 5/7/2013
This was...incredible, seriously (no pun intended) awesome. I have read and written J& L fics and this was awesome! Absolutely AWESOME!

Only thing that confused me was Riley pretty much disappearing out of the story even though she was close friends with Sirius and James. And I never really got why he suddenly cheated on her and he felt nothing about it...

But other than that, I loved it.
LittleGlassHearts chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
One word - Wow. I loved this, simply amazing and utterly emotional and just plain Awwwwwwwh! Sat and read this for a whole afternoon when I really should be have finishing coursework, but hey ho! LOVED IT!
Guest chapter 41 . 9/26/2012
best story ever, well done! emotional
Lonnie Jenson chapter 23 . 2/4/2012
Ah! Wicked curve ball! 2 of my bffs wuld freak if they read that! they made me read the twilight books and watch the movies:) I 3 Jackson Rathbone! he is awsum! this is one of my fav L/J stories i luv it i'm workin on the first ch. of my first ff rite now & 1 of the characters wuld sooo b makin fun of the L/J situation LOL! this is getting long i'll shut up now:)
lookmeintheeyesnickjonas chapter 41 . 1/26/2012
I wanted it to go on forever! However, it was such a beautiful ending. Often the ending spoils it but this was just as amazing as the rest of your work. I truly think you are a wonderful author and hopefully you'll write another long story soon! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
OfMaraudersIdjitsClotpoles chapter 41 . 1/10/2012
"I want to fight beside you - always." 3

This story was amazing and I rarely come across such a story with such a good ending. You should be proud :)
KonohaOrangeHokage chapter 41 . 1/10/2012
beautiful story. Ur awesome!
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