its really good upto now and exciting

Sorry I'm reading this so late. I'm a fan though, so thx! and ttyl! Love your writing style! .

Puppy-Shipping! YIYI!
And omg Atemu Is such a awesome...omg i cant find the words to describe him!
Your such a Great writer! :D

very interesting story.

That was amazing! Even though it was obvious that it was a lie to save Yuugi, you still got me hating Atemu for a bit, y'know. Anyway, I adored the ending, you couldn't have ended it better, I have to say.

Oh my Ra...this story managed to shatter my heart into a million pieces and now its put it back together! c I love it! Its amazing I usually don't read stories that make my heart race, but damn that was good! I especially love the ending "We'll go with you!" XDD I've never picture Malik as a cold blooded murderer wanting to humiliate people, but Ra you made this so good I could cry! Really Excellent work!

This was such an AWESOME story! *grin*

Woah the irony lol but dead serious AMAZING

Not good.
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IT IS AWESOME!

wow

Hikari: Oh yes, and a new cycle of annoyance was born...
Echo: Hikari.. That's rude.
Hikari: Not really, if I was in the story I would totally be mad at the smart a-
Echo: I only cuss, and great story.
Hikari: Hmm... He was a smart a-
Echo: One warning was enough, you want two now?
Hikari: Um... not really...
Echo: Than shut up.
Hikari: Kay.

Good job on this story.

Awesome story! I absolutly loved it! When I finished this I was like YAY! for half-a-second before thinking this Better have a sequel it was that good, no joke!

-ToxicE

Amazing story, an absolute treat to read. _

OMFGAAAAAAAH... Puppyshipping. I love it so. Of course, you already know that from the roleplay. ; So hard not to squeal like the fangirl I am when I see such fluffiness.

You would do me a great favor if you made a Puppyshipping fic. Just saying. :D

~CL