My mind only had one thing repeating as this ended - Uh oh!

Poor Lockdown... he needs to find someone to make him happy. Just not Prowl... He belongs to Jazz.

Beautiful, just like the rest of this series. It has wonderful characterization. And the emotion in it. I love it, awesome job. :)

ooooohh... -snickers- Bad Lockdown!

You my TF friend are awsome. Your on my list of good TFA authors.

C.D.

What a lovely little meditation on difference and acceptance, disguised as slash and the death of a dove.

I watched that video you made on Youtube (Away from Me) and I was hell bent on finding this fic. Now that I have, I love this pairing. Thanks! Definately going on the faves list.

In a weird way, I liked that Jazz and Prowl were having a bad fight. It was bound to happen eventually, and it intensifies the feelings of separation, that ‘I don’t want it to end like that’ way.

Very cool idea to have Lockdown being deaf. I’m taking ASL, and we learn about deaf culture as we go, so for me, it was really cool having a deaf character, even if he’s not a Deaf one (it’s the difference between the physical aspect and the culture). As crude and even cruel as Lockdown is, I like his character. He’s the total opposite of Jazz.

The entire sequence where Prowl hovered between life and death after the fall was heart racing, it was so awesome. I even liked his initial panic to realizing that Optimus now knew, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that Prowl was Flawed.

Ultimately, what I like best is the different ways Prowl and Lockdown approach life, approach living as Flawed. Prowl is a stronger person than he himself gave himself credit for.

I love Prowl so much, great job :D

I get it now!

Nice. I enjoy TF: Animated, and I like the way Prowl has been portrayed. I also like the different spin you put on him. Its usually Jazz that's the hidden blind mech, but its nice to see it changed up now and then. Good job. Off to read Paradoxs now :) Woot!

Hey great story, love how everything can just seem possible with your stories (like Lockdown having a flaw and everything).

I just can't help but feel sorry for that bird at the end. XD

i continuously return to your page here at in hopes that you've updated your jazz/prowl : light saga. lo and behold you have and BOY was it a most wonderful morsel to savor. might i add that it has been so long since i have read something so riveting that it gives me chills from start to finish. i hope there is more you have in store for us, whether cute commsex or something far devious!

Liked it a lot! I really like Lockdown as a character. His "flaw" was a surprise to me. You've done so well with your fics. You should be proud.

Hope to see more of him in future fics you write.

oh, I feel sorry for lockdown. It's sad he can't hear some of the greatest sounds in life

This was an utterly beautiful story.