Wow... that was just plain beautiful. Goodness, I love this story so much!

i really like it. it's very simple and it shows that he really cares for momo. love isn't all in kisses and hugs right? they are all very in character. i like how you made matsumoto and toushiro have a kind of closer relationship than just taichou and fukutaichou especially cuz i think that they do kind of have a relationship like that. and i bet matsumoto is thinking about gin when she is talking to him (stupid gin for leaving!).

good job and keep writing!

poor toushiro, hopefully hinamori will get betta

That was really sad and touching. Sniffles.