That was amazing, so sweet, and so true to the character of Jasper! I loved it.

So sweet. Probably the best Jasper/Alice fic I've read on here. Keep it up!

That was so sweetD

aw

That was damn amazing (:

First story I have read about Jasper on this subject

You really captures it all very well x

So cute, what can I say? The emotion was very thick and dark, yet the ending was happier. Jasper sees more bad than good in himself, and Alice sees more good than bad in him. They balance each other. Excellent writing. "Hum" maybe should be "hmm". but whatever. ;)

This was soo cute ... I love it! Very nicely done. I love how you describe Jasper's emotions ... very detailed. Amazing!

jasper in a nutshell. your fucking amazing at writing, go look at my review for deathofme, you can be my author any day

LLOL ;]

I loved this so much. I have a feel that you truly captured Jasper's emotions, and their love for each other. :)

OMG!

Could this be an cooler!

I love emo Jasper so much!

-GBNF

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful.

I've been a huge Alice-Jasper fan since the beginning. I always felt Jasper never got enough of the story as he desrved. It's nice someone got inside his head and told some of his story.

stunningly written.

keep it up

what can i say? i loved it.

Jasper is one of the best characters and he totally gets ignored. I think that you did this very well. One of my favorites, for sure. ]

I really like it. It's very emotional, and you seemed to really get into Jasper's head. :) Wonderful.

Aw. I LOVED it. I thought it was very cute, and very true to Jasper. Your writing skill is very good - I'm not sure why you were so selfconcious on the challenges board. Quite lovely!