While I have trouble understanding Kaylee most times I like where you went with it

Wow. That was the most Kayleeish fic I've ever read. You got her botched up English just right. It is too many apostrophes, but that's the only way you can get Kaylee-talk down right, I think. I could definitely here her voice. It sort of made me realize how many other fics don't do her speech justice. And the story was awesome too.

Fantastic story. You have Kaylee's voice down so well, it's scary.

Aw! That's cute. Damn girl, you got her accent down good.

the apostrophes were a bit irritating at first, but then it's good charicterization on your part, so I'm over it _

great fic

YOu did great at catching kaylee's voice! Its really good. I like it. Its cute. good job!