This story is very good; I'm glad you ended it so well for the bat-family. And Bruce's awkward emotion-conversations were very entertaining :). I don't so much appreciate the amount of language Jason uses: I understand that it illustrates his personality and frame of mind, but I feel you could have gotten the point across without quite so much of it flying around. Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and thank you for posting it. Well done!
Blessings,
Sophia the Scribe

nice

I loooove the ending :D i wish if there were epilogue

God i love dick's optimisim and how he keeps smiling and annnoys jason by continous mentioning of him being part of the bat family

Oooooh bluejay. that was sweat in his own way trying to defend his brothers.

I love the whole dick-jason brotherly conspircy against Tim XD thing. I always though giving their personality they can get along well.

I like how Tim is the voice of reason XD between his brothers. And this story takes place before Damian become Robin?right

Fantastic story! I loved it!

I even cried during that scene with Jason and Bruce on the roof. That doesn't usually happen to me from a fan fiction.

SO GOOD! enjoyed it. Really wished there was an epilogue though. just so i could keep reading! great work on character portrayal. loved it.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
I AM IN LOVE.

Because this, right here, is a perfect masterpiece.
It's beautiful, & sweet, and just kdnvbgjfjsdbfjnsdsaasnasbjk. Wonderful.

I'm at a HUGE loss for the exact words, but this is a really magnificent story. Which I hope to see you write more of.

As it is really great.

How you characterize all of them. Jason, Dick, Tim, & Alfred. Undeniably Perfect.

Thank you for writing something so amazing!

And please don't ever stop writing.

yes! ive finally finished reading this!
great story! :-)
i just wish damian wasnt a demon so he could of been a part of the happy ending but other then that everything was perfect! :-D jason interacting with tim and dick was always amusing! and even alfred got to kick but a little! ha!
and ur fight scenes were nicely written. alot pf writers have trouble wiht those but you didnt seem to have that problem!

wow intense chapter! :-D

i love jason and dick's interactions! :-D
but no jason come back-dont leave! dick! go after your brother! :'-(

timmys alive! yay

ohhpoor timmy! no!
and poor dick's coffee table lol