Ahhh so cute and lovely! This is so sweet and well written! Job well done!

Yay for Lily :)

Loved it! Nicely done :)

Yay! That was entirely too sweet for me to NOT tear up!

Aw! That was so sweet and cute! I loved it! :)

This was a very well written story! For once we saw a real, human Lily... I liked your characterisation!

That was so sweet!

AWW! I loved this story... even with the Rose/Scorpius!

It's beautifully written! Your words flow so wonderfully... you don't see that much in the HP fandom.

Very Very cute story and I now love Will!

cute. I loved this!

Aw! I believe in magic! :D

That was great! I can totally see Lily in this, being one who always felt overshadowed. I also love the idea of one of Harry and Ginny's kids marrying a muggle. Just a question. Ever thought of doing a one shot of Will asking Harry for Lily's hand? I would love to know how that went.

No flame...just an observation.

You are an unabashed romantic...nothing wrong with that!

Having Lily be ordinary is indeed a twist, having her marry a muggle is as well.

A bit tell not show in spots but enjoyable!

Bart

I think this is best of the next gen stories I have read of yours so far. I like your Lily and her connection with Will was so strong. I like her interaction with the Weasley clan and the fact that she doesn't feel like she fits in with her family is very realistic. Well done here!

-honda

AH! Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. So, so good. E!

aw! so ...cheesy, but cool! i loved will!